【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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% N. I7 c0 x! W& ?. h我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
) F, b( X- s* QFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
/ e( w& B, I: [* tIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
2 I) m$ Q: a) @( y, Y* QLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
7 F0 q1 t# Z6 y! p  x! GI want to confess that I love you,
4 M5 s8 Z1 {- w' FBut I never did
$ e  b( @5 F" y8 B9 k2 X) g( Q: [One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# i% F) S, y* x6 C) C+ wIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, A: _. t3 n  SI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 x6 q2 q1 l/ h$ `( r, y/ L2 q* gCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
, X6 X; ?2 [3 ^9 ~! X6 @0 a5 YWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
$ y6 o! J1 x8 T# o" |$ SBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  ~" _7 S) c0 _! _4 VI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
- L. h; X, a# v4 N$ gEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

( F! G. r/ F2 S& i& g" v( }[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
, T9 w) u" C0 B$ r+ V<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
; Z+ ]/ W7 t3 q% v4 A+ a3 `4 [<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
1 k0 `6 O2 x+ D6 ~2 H4 {% h( Q7 a<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
9 Z" M/ w4 ?+ K9 [  s+ @<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
! A6 l) U8 `6 I<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
* [; _9 R1 M" b5 @9 B6 r" q<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
  ]) y$ q  P: [' p8 `& y3 \& _/ L, u<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
5 k3 F0 I- \/ g, N7 b3 H<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
" D2 ^+ H( s2 G, w& A1 Y% R; M8 H<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
( r2 [& s% P4 y<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
; f. j# A6 Q3 |2 V5 Z1 r  C<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
# V4 {7 w5 @- i6 d% C<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
, q, H/ v7 C) s& z<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
) i  p7 C8 r7 B, z0 G. O9 Z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: Q# F+ J( l- b! G6 v<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# [3 q. E! R7 y4 A, _% z/ P<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. S) }, g/ G( }( j, Q8 g3 u  n<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
& y1 B! ^" ?5 k% ]<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
! ^. t: Y" @' {: A9 y! _- j<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 n- S" F; n- R4 c  i, ], [<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 S$ y% D2 e4 ^! j& o5 k# F9 W  n<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% H3 k) m/ _" L+ l% Y% h3 j5 t<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( k/ C* Q' N  a' H( r( `% ~<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
" J1 k4 a8 n1 i; A" |. N& X6 C3 c<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( f' ~  I9 J# [+ l: a6 r; [<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; S! g0 u- }6 E<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
+ ?  z- v$ \) t2 S8 i( C<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
% P( F) f2 K& _/ b+ Y<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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" ?* Y/ ]: \* E# V  N  ] 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

8 t7 Q8 N# Z4 F) |) _$ @这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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( n' J( z/ T- N这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* j% \! p, K+ l  H, K; J<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! q/ t1 E% t$ |8 r, v. ?<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>