【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
! C( Q% g. M* s, m) F  mThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
9 i, E# N+ `1 u) ZFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
/ ]5 G3 s& _; s+ w% _. B; nBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
4 j- r, C# _7 w; @6 PI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
; f+ |$ R+ b# y2 _/ ZWhy is it so difficult to express?
; g2 c; J4 _0 L$ w- L  Z- I; UI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
: s: W6 l  K1 s- M4 AOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( e' X; J4 ~. _! [# eIf today isn’t too late,
5 j5 F, a: K- [. lI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: B  a5 j. @' yCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
* j4 r  I) j+ WLove… just the word love
, [: W1 A: F+ B- p  K; JWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
, ~- b5 y  Q* QBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ g8 @8 a& b7 v: AIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
6 p1 o6 _8 F; f# ~& uEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
$ l' M1 c6 @+ d$ a& nEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

( C# F: [6 O- n3 P" F8 l4 y* f<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
. v0 q* ]* v8 t8 G3 c! k<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
$ h) w- o8 X) _0 M- d7 B- s<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
) s8 g. n  T4 }* e9 K" @  b% e<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
- T  H7 A" }+ s: E% V$ [<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
% L" O3 }" T+ g# L<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
$ O4 v3 ]$ S: g# r<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 T: _9 K' b; V1 A( t0 p<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
  H: Z" i6 W: G( j* p<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
6 Z6 `; m" t$ Q<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ w: Y6 T* k& E  ]6 V1 r5 M; z* i<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 E8 }* X" ~- P& s6 p- z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% g- z3 Y2 a- [<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
  ]6 V# i# t* C# W% P0 f3 @" w<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
# R- v1 q" F% z9 ?<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
8 a& J1 x0 U  M% \+ k0 p& a<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
6 v/ ]/ f' t* j0 E# N( l<P>但我不会 </P>
+ \5 L6 Y' G4 Q+ H  ^, n8 k<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
; V5 n5 b! Z  \<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- j) \' _( j. k; v7 }, O<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 p- ]( Z7 u+ [' G) w<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* [& Z: |8 i" c# e9 }8 \/ `! k; o<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ f6 J6 R4 v* u1 K<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 r! e0 j( ~; j' `: A$ e. G8 d<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: b6 `% q/ _) l& ~% h% W<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
/ B8 o1 S* Y% @3 C+ C7 b: l<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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2 v' y, o- ]0 X, p 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

5 w$ y0 W" n, _这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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! e( P3 [6 |3 F6 x  {3 A这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ q& z8 G) y7 s4 j<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>