【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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1 `9 L; \" y6 _7 P6 q3 }我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
1 d% _6 P& ]/ E6 C2 |From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
' \( W/ `5 R% L# h  p7 vIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
6 e7 t# R2 N3 z/ hLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
3 _- u; h6 T/ t% a# f% {$ V. VEntrust my love within your heart
1 a; C) T6 N6 q6 V) y3 }8 w3 n+ lLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( y$ {3 h# r  z+ U' e$ JI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
; j% A: A( r  Y4 J7 n8 ~* WEntrust my love within your heart
$ h6 p: u; }7 O4 vCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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1 L7 S3 N4 m  U! V" ^) c' y[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

$ A0 W! A; d7 ?8 G5 M<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
* q8 u. M1 p6 T/ g, e8 F<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
& m; N. P; @! F% K- C4 ]9 h- `<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
3 m; G( Y8 e4 V' J<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
* N4 E; L1 e# K5 G<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
5 n$ H$ `4 k' Z# t. G! y5 c<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
* Z% x! K( ]1 H/ k5 o4 y& x* x<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
1 p6 [! \2 }- m7 f  O1 I& ^<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
% L0 Z4 U* g! Q<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
( R1 [2 P; O7 j0 T; c4 E5 Y<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
/ V. X3 G- c: l9 \% i<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
( L9 _3 G9 u  F) E0 a<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
5 }5 o3 ~6 G5 I/ k# h<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 j. M$ [1 s: G/ w( E<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
- ^5 d% ~- V# q, \( b<P>但我不会</P>
# S# b7 |6 e; u: D+ l<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% K0 z: m4 l1 U0 ], a1 _% t<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 \% Z, e' p8 u$ Z$ W! w<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
- k* R; Z5 N% o1 p0 ?- I<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% p- F3 c2 \7 ?<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- C+ l# r% Z+ M$ q0 j9 [<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ K; U; n& ?: G  f% n7 E<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 _- ^/ O3 q+ c5 {( q<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
4 j; A* a* |) @6 M<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
0 t( g  O8 Q- a<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
; N1 O5 E& M% }( W; v5 H5 C0 i<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 p* S* K' t, I9 r<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ [( d* y  G  u# Y9 ?+ O1 z8 M<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  z8 }' K; k1 D6 M<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ C4 v( |- z' B# A, w: N<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; j# x! f# W% q, G; M<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
" p5 x3 w8 n6 g5 b4 [<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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, x. g, J' a6 X  O; y这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

- d- @- E3 i: {) Y这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>