【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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( g2 e, [0 F# K& P我另将歌词附在此。
7 }- }/ \0 W  V% n2 WThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
7 f0 I1 K8 x8 |9 \# e8 HBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
$ _) ?$ b3 {5 p% K7 w/ a6 ]But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
: O/ V2 G2 ?! \1 A2 L: ]I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 Z8 V& ~; U' f8 n+ e) m& h8 S# [I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' k: I1 A$ S3 CCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
8 W% ^+ o2 y- E' z7 n5 XLove… just the word love
: h6 n9 e' B: }! V& ~5 PWhy is it so difficult to express?
; y" h/ q. l9 [" o; j% z$ |7 `& |$ h9 EI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
' L+ `+ W, y5 e: a% A. }One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ t1 p8 e  Y1 ^( SIf today isn’t too late,
8 f1 J9 h; _" V4 @I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. y4 d+ k, [. F& N" `# H  RI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: v. e* H) ]$ d: U. ^Can I entrust it to you?
1 ?" [% J/ s$ @1 W* q" s) aEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

' l" ], N* ^4 w8 O5 r1 W9 |<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
6 Z9 |3 t, C% f+ N$ ~4 }<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
( z0 j7 q" }( A<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
( U  s+ j9 X9 _; Z" J<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
* E7 |; E7 r) z  X/ z+ u$ b<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
; `; d% q) p  b1 R- J3 p; S  r& b$ V<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
5 K" q0 g3 U: E<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
! T& n7 O5 j' p' ~<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
3 G$ b- V. g1 Q7 j<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
. ~9 W# k4 g( a" N<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
/ j7 {  L; h7 x% [- w' N4 N<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
5 N. G4 ~1 V$ O! ]8 `6 O<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
5 \/ Y( N! I3 G7 a* B5 T<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
3 q5 I( R& \' s4 {& f<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
1 A9 [& _; L7 U, p& e7 N6 M<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
$ D' a* ^9 \( d; ?# N. T* J9 y<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; M& I7 F# z4 B8 \$ L: U<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 k  j9 [7 X" i# a<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
5 ^( h* f2 w! V3 J2 z4 E<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
( M7 E% h1 R: |& i<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ _& T$ ?6 Z$ Q* m* R: v9 l& f6 e& a. P<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ n+ W9 v! Q& D" A! x! S9 q8 q9 ~* i<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- r' L( G6 i  f<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 R5 `5 @- b5 x) ]* o<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
8 w, N* p. k: Z& U6 ~- z. c% |<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
# K4 {, s" q" V<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ {4 E7 m. m+ W9 w' ^* p<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 {# i$ S6 p  ^) _: ?<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 L0 X1 N8 }* k; s6 e# A5 d/ v& [<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ v2 l4 @  p9 f9 I/ r, ?<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 H% |7 p( W5 w* Q" y0 f<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% h4 g1 x$ X  W/ J/ G8 P<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& p; j, `$ {6 q8 R- o<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
0 F4 r0 C- O: N9 R! H<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
4 n/ N' g9 n! \9 k9 ?! p<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

/ K! c6 u" H" T6 m3 a8 N* l: M 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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& s. k3 z/ ^# o# t% U8 w% C<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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