【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
, o0 A" C- M  x& I* Z5 XFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
; u! L' y1 H0 {0 cBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
: r1 j8 W  c: A+ P7 L" H$ b2 g. P1 lIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
! g, v0 ^" T  F0 C5 NI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
- ]9 R' q3 m( w) t8 Q! E0 sOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
, b  ]3 S! O8 T# m  ]3 B! ~I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# W4 z/ i4 ^6 U1 J" BCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
  C. E! i* x3 Z/ e" n9 DWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
0 Y4 h3 s$ I: U) I, o+ T- [) j6 CBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 A5 u: ]6 ?  r7 yI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
4 Y' k$ I) K1 d% \3 VEntrust my love within your heart

+ t# A7 N+ a6 r) p: k) w) v[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

5 p  Z5 ]' S# @4 x0 Y! ~<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
" E5 k  t+ i% }; l4 n<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
: l& B( M  g! y0 O" Q6 R<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
! a6 ~' |9 n6 S+ `<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
- N6 C# g. b- W1 N3 y% Y7 A<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
* M3 Q" I  p3 P/ }% \  i<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
& G9 d$ N# S/ U2 X<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
+ \* y: e, ]! c3 f<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
, `1 B: d* P# @# g<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
/ ]  [" C5 W, i4 C2 G! Z& _<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
$ s0 ^( P. P) G: Y2 ]/ F2 l7 |<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
3 D: H2 s" e% x  T<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
- [( h2 }, t/ ^; ~<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
' T5 D5 n5 ^6 i4 k* E0 s<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
) C/ @$ i, C; Y  k1 Q8 A<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ ?! f8 q/ j) G! G<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 `. v; `/ V' H5 D<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' [/ A, Y7 t9 u<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
3 |8 |' o- P6 W2 I2 |8 E7 y<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 {( [. b. Q8 E) _( z<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
( Q4 |& c0 b- @3 v& d<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
9 M! L1 M5 R& Y3 T<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 R5 h( a& k) n4 L- F' t7 K  V# b  s<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, k" P: ~" q' f  I: [( K" Z" Z: k<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
- ~: ?8 k8 M1 y1 M! Y1 n<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: W5 z' I, v2 w: f4 n( K: d<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, D; _0 e  t' _! T, P0 G% ~<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: R! K# E" H' I0 v7 X& L- r<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ D  p6 h1 j4 W, z3 m+ ]<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
! }2 N9 i2 r, s2 P<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

$ T; M* r4 x% T) d, o6 }9 p这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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4 o0 X4 y" j4 G  f% h! `3 c' L. @这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>