【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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0 |6 C: E9 F( c8 b1 I7 \我另将歌词附在此。
) g9 K5 `0 I; q  q; P3 E- t  [+ FThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
2 t3 u/ k0 d* lThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
  ~: O) B$ F) G1 x% KI already loved you with all my heart
3 ?. ^5 T+ w3 A0 [0 G- qWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
/ e6 T% Q2 o2 i8 G0 z  `Why is it so difficult to express?
) G3 C4 ?2 H  U% u/ O2 FI want to confess that I love you,
2 i) n0 J1 `9 K% |But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
& T7 V- ]/ t! w* R$ hI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
+ q# _* j8 N3 b7 E+ I! p9 uEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
( M9 ^1 K- L* V! DWhy is it so difficult to express?
" @; z: x: B0 M+ E; ?4 UI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 V, F6 m6 x1 O( `3 MIf today isn’t too late,
, M  ~8 f+ C- ~9 C  qI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
% _3 O( b) {+ PEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
. B0 i4 h2 g5 i* A- `- o, x7 eEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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0 ?$ Q* ~6 r- S/ v1 r' @<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
. u3 ~- B) D8 N3 E9 Z7 O. Y<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
5 g( n2 p  F+ F" |2 o' o<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
7 ?- X& M+ r. J- z, H7 L<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
# T' t" R9 U5 W# ]; A; s<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
# g" H8 y) Y" S, R4 Y<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
/ r( e; v, e9 n# C8 w% |4 `<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
6 r. ~) M. {" z# D3 n3 A/ b<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
: U' E0 F6 Z/ C/ ]: X<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
4 v4 |5 L. j" r5 V1 Z) s<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
0 M6 t( f% v* }8 B* h- ^& O1 x<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 I+ v8 L' e8 H( [<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
( Q( o3 h- W5 ]8 z- }6 p4 @<P>但我不会</P>
% K4 V) p0 I. t+ Y8 s2 U<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
2 y+ S. |/ Z) [  l4 A<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ I0 }7 N! k) h9 B<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
) J/ S, V* W6 Z0 Q<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( \* P. ^) c9 ~/ _  T<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) n, U- ?) ]. _) ]6 p, K- j1 \<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# \, X! W0 c& I% Y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 I  |5 ^  d8 q4 v<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: i& K% o4 o9 u& }<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; @; A+ d4 s' ~4 s6 `0 ^<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
6 x8 Q% I: |. ?% M) U' e3 t<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, [  ]; X' T/ e4 j<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
- X# ~8 \/ }- L6 @6 t) c1 p$ l<P>但我不会 </P>
2 ]" C7 U$ g! R<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: e" ?/ E7 j8 n<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
- U7 G; N6 g5 E% E! z<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 ~& n! N4 j5 h<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 m" D: U8 _) `; x, D1 W; g<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 @/ r/ B1 I# @$ {4 d0 \( X<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 R3 E- a! b6 d( e3 |* W% W<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
1 E" k, B0 S  _- W, i<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

4 g& c' S, V" l% m( ^# m这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>