【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
/ i& h8 h+ \3 a$ j* J+ |The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
* A9 U$ D1 ^  _) tFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
: O# ]) @( o5 B. j% h' N' |We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
6 I) W8 O- i$ FIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
5 R- p7 |% ]' x( w5 OLove… just the word love
% ?+ V' g. w; j" [  l: uWhy is it so difficult to express?
* F, Q  A0 T- `" f4 gI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
. b: G/ @& @) ]3 Q- z' VOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 R9 c' `  x, v6 V5 ~If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 r* G& r! b8 W. o1 |6 uCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
. x" Z; Y( W! l+ Y* d7 QLove… just the word love
  ^) Y* y3 q) iWhy is it so difficult to express?
* |( a# L, W0 ?) PI want to confess that I love you,
" J' ~* t/ {6 Y8 G- @% K4 a( WBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" z3 C* j5 R/ C0 R9 e- h3 Q# C2 kIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 T$ I  _; k* {I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
" s, k+ O$ V" Q% }1 n4 KCan I entrust it to you?
+ L+ U1 k/ n' `- e9 w9 d: S' OEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
1 ~5 D, K& ~! N2 E<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
: F2 ?5 {! o( w* D6 D<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
- y1 B+ T0 c; J/ q<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
5 C7 c& [8 M' P: N7 A7 |( ~<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
2 i! I2 l9 a* e8 Z<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
; T  z. D& Z" v- I2 o<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
6 |/ |7 q! ~7 i( S! H* ]<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
, Y% W& b  t3 H% U$ }9 J<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
9 a, s1 j6 O3 [: C5 f7 `<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
0 N1 ~, _( F4 W5 o7 x. X' ?; e<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
  T2 O) Z& Z! [( S0 f# h; X- b+ Y<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
( u- u. B) s+ e+ E+ N1 r, u1 b<P>但我不会</P>
' o. A$ I* ^0 h" C<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
1 z7 C( b7 N; G- {: E, B<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
, G) x* w7 Z6 `0 K" Z: C<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 k! Q/ L- e7 n; ^3 i: o, t% e<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' I: D# z/ }$ E: R0 _# I<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' U4 o" p2 a4 O% J  Y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  @; v( r) N6 a1 H+ p<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
* D8 j3 }  I4 p9 E& G<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 c  Z& k$ W6 M( |- A2 K<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
8 @& @3 H& v! u+ i+ O2 z/ r<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
5 l1 n6 `" V/ M2 W( [<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. q% v! Y! C' Z- a6 x$ t  }<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
& o$ c$ o2 }) M<P>But I never did </P>
+ v% n& U2 J1 z2 W3 s<P>但我不会 </P>
+ @- E5 j: M0 i) V<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: {- H, o, o7 F<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
- k! [9 A8 u2 e. w2 a: P+ w  I3 e, s% A<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! G+ v) X; Y7 Z/ K<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; ]  d/ A! o- ]& r<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 T; f% i) `3 D8 c" ^3 U, b+ b<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 |/ \) C: o/ `4 g- R<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
3 [8 \1 ~7 X# L1 J% N8 v( _. M( H<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

; g! R% W; m- ^) P3 Q这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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3 C( l1 a$ B2 L+ o<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>