【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
2 |! C9 ?, P& }* d+ KThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
+ r- W- i5 Y, Z8 Y8 q9 ~5 \0 _/ TI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
6 [) f$ `7 O2 r& K0 iI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
8 _8 I. H+ _* O: NWhy is it so difficult to express?
) ^1 G% g# P; y, a3 D, }I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
* Z! L9 x* Q& o: ]$ v$ A) |One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 k# |: g# p. S  }; p6 h8 EIf today isn’t too late,
0 I1 J) j7 H* k# G! DI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& D4 O- s& F3 N' y  y5 B3 [I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
& ^, ?9 |: ]/ H, e! QEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
- T$ R0 w% B) e! |; c9 xWhy is it so difficult to express?
# ?% }% K* z# }I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
# z. U* X% `; r; q5 _One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
- h# `1 x! j4 B! F3 M1 LI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; m/ T3 v" X7 GCan I entrust it to you?
* a- _. s% K/ P, f7 yEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
8 E% C0 ^% q5 g' T9 C<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
( h. a7 K& `# z, O<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
4 a9 ~! `3 y. Q" A<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
# j; ?. f; _* y+ l( l<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
3 G( q8 j. f% u  K7 m2 ?3 N<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
  b, S2 ~# D" C$ u" ^' }2 k<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
) i- K4 x4 A9 v8 U1 O  Z+ N<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
- S1 w/ l% p# w<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( n5 \/ Z- Q# y# [$ O<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
; {4 q/ ?$ K2 Z: `% ]<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; ]' ^. I: H' e  V<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ K+ y' N- E* v+ R+ g8 b<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ j7 i- N4 m4 i* x<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! p) P* l& t! E$ X<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" Y5 q+ V. }/ F0 b6 U<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
, ?1 T9 C; F$ N6 S( X<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
: \* J' C  T- @* U; y<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
% q8 P; v; f) x<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; w' k! L! k- X1 B3 q5 I<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
9 ?8 N" m, Q2 c  h; V  T<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
* B" m2 r- e/ |$ |4 H/ w<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
6 e6 Q/ v3 X7 u# o<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
. ^) {9 C9 C* e6 }, ?6 o3 k<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; M- U! y: s) L: _" j) N9 x: I<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; _9 Z! w/ K1 N8 v+ w, }& J0 E8 C<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
/ j" V% U2 f& q% \" v<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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, W$ L8 ?$ m8 Y( n0 a: H 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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; s1 A- R; M& I- @9 j2 U3 l这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 o" D8 F' `& N$ t<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>