【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
9 O: G: Q1 r' t$ g6 i/ u' KThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
- U" f! w3 ?" Y' KThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
. L1 \' y7 \4 Z# `From the first moment we met,
" \' M, v+ z" f" V% H& z5 UI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
: k3 h1 d& ~2 R% }; L! \1 |But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
6 P% Y# ]' w5 W8 A% a1 x% DI would probably know how you feel
9 [) J/ ]. \/ W5 U/ z' z, T4 |Love… just the word love
! ~8 I7 `2 ]2 l6 n3 u/ F" W+ fWhy is it so difficult to express?
% X7 f8 k3 `" ?5 wI want to confess that I love you,
$ T) N9 J& _  D, {But I never did
4 J0 y/ ]" Z+ a, Y. W) AOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 M, Z0 ]. Y  y  Y! nCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
& Y& E$ S; y7 b0 @  w2 \Why is it so difficult to express?
; \% ^- m, b- y: z+ YI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
' `6 `: ?! n+ W5 nOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, w; U. w* D% gIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 R- F0 \: P/ sI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ o8 d  L, I; y5 `6 JCan I entrust it to you?
2 f# n: v- X, K" X6 G& \Entrust my love within your heart
4 W$ K$ ^6 T- q, jCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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7 B+ s$ m" p* }. }  m  X+ y( @, ~8 N[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
9 l6 w8 X: q& w( j- G; R1 r<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
' q5 A( W% J# q$ s6 m7 x<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
" h5 B4 l0 G# B) }* m- ~<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
' ]. F: d. `$ n% y4 Z9 x<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
; P: x" K; K% D# v. Q<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
, _) @3 X; V0 n9 O  h<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
# t. U! o; D- y! M<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
. _# @3 H" L. Z  ?<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
% V+ J* T3 V% l, M% Q) G2 K<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 l6 a+ H6 ^3 ?, n' G% Y0 W<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- R1 e/ ~7 P4 u% R8 w4 }  w, B+ X<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 V1 b9 ~: b2 l( f9 n0 m<P>Love… just the word love </P>
9 a# D" ^( W0 V8 ?6 V8 c<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
! G8 Q, w( X( P: m<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 ~; p$ i2 ^/ B$ w<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
) U3 N( K7 ?% c( H. o1 I% v/ _<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
1 k7 h* k8 H3 L% f. C<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 }) a! M: }1 f/ U<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ y2 T2 ^) e$ t; b( ?& y$ x! O<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 {0 x6 P# ~- K  [, z; q, F$ {<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# w/ ~9 u$ r3 P4 U  }: Q. ~<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! Z# C; J2 I) Q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- O* X$ W& ?1 b" d<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 [) q) E0 m* n- u<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

9 G: m2 Q  n. L/ g* l% F) n, ^这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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