【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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/ f! j9 H9 L; w  q! ~我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
* h/ W2 \+ A, J2 o) H/ G$ ]That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
% ^9 n$ q5 ]0 Z8 SFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
" [( U1 M, ~6 l# `If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
2 D* Z4 A% |& C) ~Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
7 Q2 Q6 z+ @3 [+ }9 C  s) }But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ A/ G4 n- j. ~6 E8 E8 X# |If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
' O. D4 w2 F; Y0 e0 X/ E4 ^/ S3 PLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
- C3 x* M4 O* M, T) kI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 Z" H: }/ n. W% P. zIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( F3 W, T0 Y. O7 FI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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( f' N+ r5 E. S6 b0 q4 V6 P[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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3 r1 w+ H" ~( d0 A+ r: \<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
  c0 D8 s$ d* q* i9 ?- a<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
# m2 t  U/ x7 Y<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
. @4 d8 n2 u! Y$ L0 Y& ~<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
  ?% \& d8 r3 C5 Q<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
. g. ^% F! F+ B1 t' B* c, f<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
, A) q; D  E# _( x( l<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
: d6 m! ?0 `5 N2 d+ Q7 h<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
# g1 Z5 \, h8 q; _% ?# Y7 O3 L( K<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
, S, K8 I7 i% Q  H3 \4 y<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
3 A/ i2 S' u) x, P  n3 v; {<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
; Q6 Q2 K3 \1 ]  i' ]: p! O<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
  h/ Q* c3 w+ Y( I1 B0 M7 S+ z<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
) x5 v' c; Q/ g3 w' `<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
# Z/ e9 M# i% b& E" s, X<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- q, k% I9 o4 y6 y4 P<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ s) w+ N) s+ O' N. j4 I* H<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: {/ Z9 K: t9 g, `6 I- l/ E1 E. h<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
+ R' I) u7 F2 S8 M<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
, I0 u, b. k2 K. @+ f& ?<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
- U! [: ~) W. d+ m8 y/ i) ?<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
4 b3 r8 {3 _$ I, n5 v7 a<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: j5 E' _' N+ e/ R9 n' a<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: y/ N! q! f, x  n7 {! m* y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 C: ^5 Z6 C/ i( n+ W, f  A8 Z) p<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! \: q9 Z9 ^8 p( ^3 }<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
. p( @5 W1 ^5 q/ ]& D<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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1 q- G5 o( G" \. v/ H. t' X这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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2 u0 t6 ]' t; z6 O这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>