【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
  B0 I* Y1 o7 YFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
" q3 \8 V( M5 T, g2 j  DWe meet and talk everyday,
1 c  {" [+ b; I0 e% a9 c: iBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
7 T7 H( L% b6 G) q! aI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
& O  c; B3 H& [9 j+ x7 [Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* O, h. Q' Q# R* }5 N) ZCan I entrust it to you?
& D7 e- H) t% V0 P( V: L9 q% `2 pEntrust my love within your heart
' _. Q( [' ~, ?% FLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
# U! \6 F& d9 P% \: \, hEntrust my love within your heart
! q8 I1 w& j3 J: M' ACan I entrust it to you?
0 q4 t% p1 h; u3 j$ a" ZEntrust my love within your heart
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  V, r! G  v& R# z. d# O  r  n[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
* w8 T3 a$ C( n<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
2 b8 ~) u$ `! t7 X' w% Y$ ?<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
# a1 l$ s  P; M' t) U4 }) D2 }0 O1 @<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
9 e3 \+ t% W9 y; W; e4 Q<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
5 Q& {' `% F7 Z; U: Y9 s<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
; H. @0 k8 W: B# |6 h<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
; |6 y" ?2 U4 z, N, H9 j2 K<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! h  ?$ R8 u; Z<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 m$ T& v+ y0 v$ K0 w) A<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
3 H' g. B# W. z<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
" P" {% E; n3 j  i* P) d- F) X<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ C8 S" b2 o# ]. E- _4 L<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 r7 I1 H/ i8 g" A2 _1 q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! k, s5 {: ]; ~8 U# \7 @8 [<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( n! c) W# P* Q8 I3 U/ Z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
3 w3 u) Q1 I6 n) Q: n<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
* X4 R" K9 R5 D! K. G1 u<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  H6 V  R: K0 s, w<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
  G0 m$ g- |. T$ k9 S) Y# q1 [- ~$ v7 i<P>但我不会 </P>
, S, c' t4 I4 k* U<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 [4 ~! ]4 w& v1 i$ w% K! s3 {( B<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  U# z7 U6 C0 x, q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 [( y/ s/ f( c<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ q! \: V4 |/ H1 X& N<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
! Z; p" q$ u  V6 R9 T: l: d<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
1 `& W, R# Z% j2 Z! k% `/ n, |1 V<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  v1 G. n9 K! w6 \4 a8 r<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>