【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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* ~# T1 w/ \2 b5 DThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
2 L3 T: `( [% b  b0 {/ O% Z2 u6 K3 rFrom the first moment we met,
6 W$ x* l8 \7 [& C3 ^8 vI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
- q; c% n1 W% e* yIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
  n$ R5 s* x/ h7 ?9 L) i) J2 FI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
6 K6 b' G+ ^& `4 [Why is it so difficult to express?
# ~) ~( `8 V# F* {( E% M+ yI want to confess that I love you,
" V9 C# g9 W! Y# YBut I never did
* q, o5 D3 y6 b; ^One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 h5 w/ i* z4 X8 }$ Y' D- Y3 Q+ WIf today isn’t too late,
' Z4 @$ R( }1 K, H4 c9 E6 h! UI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
+ P! {, a" G2 h+ JWhy is it so difficult to express?
' k' }  p1 Q6 |0 K: @$ H: CI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
8 V* e) u* k  r) e* C: pI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
+ C8 k8 K! F4 L8 DEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
4 \( w6 A$ @. U* zEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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$ R6 J; ?( N9 R3 O* u' M<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
( i$ s# j" K2 k( ]6 j<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
& @4 r/ k5 o& \* C<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
% B5 q7 i% o' O$ B6 ~  U  J<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
' Z  R, N0 h+ D+ b5 W" T! a, e<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
3 ]" N& C8 z) Z6 Q/ E+ m# l<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
" ]2 W( V' t  Q<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
+ o& M/ |! W2 j<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
( L4 z% g& k6 M4 v- R<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
+ {5 M3 M9 H" d& f2 q/ k! Y0 @% f, l<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
. l9 D) f$ |, c: {+ M4 H% C  j<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
7 X0 Y+ i3 M  _/ s" Q6 w<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
3 z( o# d9 ^: B9 v+ ^# O# d<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
) U5 B1 g- p& |<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ J; S* F/ i( R( @, Z! ^<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% G% M5 R: j+ _. s8 Z) U8 p<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ J% g- m5 J) w8 X# u<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! M. q/ B, h) C! x) `- G<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ [; v1 v+ O3 H- C3 t% j6 z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
1 u$ s; z# f/ o& X<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
9 f3 b% w# H7 Q( e# I& h<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
" c: Y( F- T4 b! e5 q* z<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ k/ s8 m+ t$ G4 y7 r& c<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ r6 N- L. p* J$ l8 y$ e2 c<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( G" A. a+ [- I7 L<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' c+ ?+ L9 `, z% Q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! G  ^9 `' z# k- L0 F  W( B4 E<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* z+ d( R4 d) e/ g& z* s+ S# E<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
& x5 z) @+ c6 T, g5 H. |6 W. z6 e4 q<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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) O2 R; X2 @8 E; s$ \这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

+ W  K3 q4 p' G/ y这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>