【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
+ W; h: ?) q4 \2 Z1 HThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
- B! w+ u$ K3 L; b- EFrom the first moment we met,
9 \* x7 d0 @5 D4 G- oI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
0 c8 V& W% C8 {4 g5 G, dI would probably know how you feel
7 _& b# i% r) g* J0 l7 kLove… just the word love
& T; k: l( t! N8 FWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
, K1 R: m9 }( {; L, j+ CI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ O& L6 d/ f# \' w2 {9 O8 vI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; B5 N/ R$ E8 dCan I entrust it to you?
5 O* d4 {! U2 s6 ]& z! b" EEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
( f' P- [9 O7 D3 F, tBut I never did
( g- o1 @$ v: J9 _One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: k, Q  A, M( i* ~2 bCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
4 l2 Z: M- Y& \- s4 S7 n7 B: C9 H<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
$ c/ J8 n; ~- K9 H2 |1 K; P<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
/ w& E' n  I- D. D& L<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
9 ^# l0 S$ n! f  T3 [& ]+ X; _<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
) S* h8 ~8 \3 F, j6 Y<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
+ L1 V5 j/ k9 Q<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
! C, {! e: G# b6 J# `; [' g<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
# F' U+ z: P4 g3 E# y9 \<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
' L1 m3 d5 A  G$ [# ^+ z* R/ J<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
: O3 N& \; J0 }6 i! K+ l<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
- J, G$ e: A2 c+ O0 S, Z7 v<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
  q" l: A3 e! h8 i$ l7 E$ y<P>但我不会</P>
) h, d) W* C$ U; ?" ]<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  o- I. A2 T+ f1 E! ?3 U<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& \  N( J% `0 Q0 B<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 D3 w, s' B- t  ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 t' j$ k3 c$ ?! t- ~: J2 h<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
/ B, y3 n  {0 @, a! `& T3 I0 ]<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
  M8 Y3 [" c5 G9 u5 c8 a0 R<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
& ?& h  e# {3 h7 y& p$ q<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 t0 @( t& O( a8 X0 x4 H<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
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# O. h+ r& b; B) X, Z1 e<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
+ u( d) i3 N: g4 n+ o) ]<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) J% ]6 r' x* W; M2 ]<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
! c/ J# p1 u6 q6 @8 v<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ ~& P8 L& N& g  }" j<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' l% Y+ C6 B  e! D" O/ |2 f7 {+ A<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ D7 ^$ M$ U1 E" `/ g+ z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 G& u& X& w- v) C  c<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
7 r: I* X+ R# x2 ^+ F<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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" _8 h9 r7 p3 H, _6 ?这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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' p- {  \% w  n7 o* q8 I3 I<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>