【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# v# q# R7 c& x% x0 `6 |The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 {* G+ v3 m# b8 k. ^1 X4 KThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& D+ @; z" n0 A( N: }+ bIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 m* h; ~& k& E& m0 t% b: hMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
( R' F$ m5 P. ~" p: nI love you I love you with all my heart
% f& U+ }4 R# jNothing can compare to my love
+ n! @$ p8 l* E) A; a7 t1 NCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 `6 ?# f- z" u: I2 `2 n4 ]I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 Q: l( z6 ]# a$ ?: IWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 A/ I, `8 N7 [( H: e2 U# l: }% CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

3 Z" N  Y% V& y2 j/ Y3 b, d: o<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 S( W- e* _& ]<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 x' `% B# z2 I" ^# x<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 C& E$ Y* j. e7 a, [7 j& `<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& M' B5 \* n6 [& L<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 _. f, n6 E- W$ R2 S5 ~! i<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 o  E2 n6 ]0 @) K5 m% K8 Z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( n2 L8 l. x! a) p<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- G9 M  _' N7 Z: [  V<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# U4 c$ P7 Q) M. o5 B! {<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" g+ Y5 A6 Z# |  [& ~8 G* b<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% P6 N" w# Z; k: a# y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, j; _/ o# v* l* ~8 l, _. S* B<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! b+ T, T5 x2 w: M9 R- c. ^# d<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 G0 I) d8 j6 e$ X<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- m6 f) E2 L9 F9 D( w' x. \7 [<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 q" y( w. D& ^<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- W2 u0 X6 W/ R% t' Y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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8 |$ }; c8 Q2 T" L7 i我请你剖开它

' J( I8 E; Q1 T: i. d 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" s, P2 s3 Q& ?1 U" ]) U<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>