【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! f* r9 e3 \6 S* A8 y6 d( O. |( mThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
* \) m. A' q: Y, s4 X6 ZSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
7 e4 c- x4 T2 D& c( ]My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 T( U; ]) x1 E+ y  ^& y" dEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
: F. T0 i& q* AI love you I love you with all my heart
  U3 T# \5 @7 T. E# z2 \# @+ cNothing can compare to my love
( T* ]2 I2 S, b% f. g1 rCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; b1 _0 ~) Z8 I, v  A/ y% B6 rThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' l5 N' D: i7 a. ^/ J+ F( FYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
& l  X9 K/ C1 j' L, mYour speech can’t even keep up with it
2 m0 A( Y  Y4 d1 [" w: a/ H! ~If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- D' @9 Z. {; t) o% [<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( V; C2 P, n/ ]<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 l. L8 r; Z; n. V+ ^<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! w8 {  {) a4 N9 @<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 x' d$ F, h$ z' j<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" N* h8 `8 r% I0 m; E<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) G; L6 p* x. C) L9 H<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 l# I3 o$ z" s/ C' W4 O( N( l<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( i5 s1 B, M8 t<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 x4 j* f! ~8 R3 n* B<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ X# ?( l$ {# X( ]+ D5 q9 z& ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ g$ N  m! B7 ~8 ~- K9 W<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ T  ]. A5 T) E& a0 i. I<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 G& U, `9 Y% C/ X6 C9 T" ^<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- W, K2 ^/ c5 v! Z$ D8 |<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# h+ k5 `1 ]5 F' K8 @5 i' K& X<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( U- z! p0 l$ x5 [<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; j5 y/ c# l: c# d( q. g( H<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' F9 m' B4 H/ q8 j8 }7 a- v3 V<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ P, X8 S. i7 Z  \% q' Z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" u3 r: ~; w: s$ s" N* i<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, P& }9 |0 Q$ x: c4 k4 J: a<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 j+ p3 C. ^4 _% |! v7 j<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" g/ P( W; z! ?. j<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

5 Q8 ?( l/ }0 ]" F+ K我请你剖开它
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! ~7 V9 F" o' G% i 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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