【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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9 b) A; {& J$ q" o歌词我附在后面。
4 ?+ D/ F' v8 V: g$ Z" k' X: mThe moonlight is shining brightly,
/ b$ s2 y0 ]# d; F+ R* RMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ F, a; Y- U; ]  E0 V6 aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
- q1 e- ^- x" H- z# WWith the moon kissing it every night
' f- ~7 E1 r, [0 |% xSeeing the sky content with its love
  f  }. O8 l+ sIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
' x" {" z" p8 o: q0 d' z/ O7 HMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, s! H8 V- Z3 t2 n6 LI love you I love you with all my heart
  |) V0 w' m0 r+ YNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# L* ?' _! F0 LThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& O6 m3 ?/ k" S7 M; Z4 C5 G0 tI want so much to see inside your heart
1 A+ ~+ j! K+ l' w$ N: VI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" c9 }5 A4 \0 y$ V. b8 e: tI’m still filled with fear
7 s! y: N/ A# W# j0 R7 j* cYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
- q) ^. I2 z3 A" N+ I3 p: T: p& M4 Z, VI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* {( Y8 T9 m' v# \With such a tongue as yours,
* F" D( |) H+ V  `5 ?5 ~9 MYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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8 h8 T, v8 Z+ v; t+ C2 N$ T<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- Y' V1 R* q' O+ _<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ s" d6 T4 r/ d) r2 [  Z' o<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 e4 h: ~: W4 c' P<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- ~% f* ?* F8 E3 c<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* }& z5 ^9 }7 I& K  F& y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 o* D. K; w- F; _4 m$ q6 r8 L<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 t# |1 {- v4 J. J, V& [; F5 ^3 [<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 A5 {* x# _% _# c) e0 I6 q7 L" r<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( J: ?( I  c6 P; [<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 }3 n2 j% `9 z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( e1 C! j4 r: n) J<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( r2 U( d& ~5 m4 C- k  M<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  O8 z3 X; D3 {; A<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 X! S( h" o% w% O- s<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' [& ~0 ?  z4 ]8 H( D( h! @4 ^* W<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# a; q8 q6 ^8 Y2 N( B/ I<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" ^* g1 f4 d6 M# g: N/ K1 M<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. `) j3 g* u6 I9 u8 ~<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; Z$ y  }! n  D4 a<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" z4 i. a* Q. P5 X1 I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  n5 A) G7 K, n2 A9 G, |: ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& S, W: i! k# z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& f0 b+ F( f$ y3 Z2 C<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 `4 e% t1 H6 k/ V; Y3 N  }8 d<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 y  ?( ~2 b2 ~2 T3 o' ^  D<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- Z0 e, }* ]1 G, w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 O# c! }+ J! v6 n7 S$ o* t% w<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% O. k4 `- P% ?<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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( \/ C3 D$ [( k我请你剖开它
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8 K8 o+ g3 `5 _$ w. _3 F) H 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 Q( h% F6 y: y4 i<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>