【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ w3 ]4 I; j/ M) K+ WThe sky is happy down to its soul
1 f3 w+ y# a$ @& p# {6 T* c& ~8 I, YWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; B% o7 @# [! [9 q* oIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
. F1 T1 A9 R' U5 o9 w) \My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 ]% J0 o3 A2 E. f, Q- IEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  ^/ U5 x  `) j2 J3 g) x, }1 {3 LI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 A% t( ~0 J* W$ w. ]7 J- rI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! r; |  ?. s' L( Z: v8 c, a0 Q- `I regret not dying
' R7 y1 y. I+ p- b7 H8 XI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" ]5 E/ l% i+ q8 Y( }4 bRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

2 t# ?8 D# I- C$ o' c+ j<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) Q3 C/ K/ e3 X7 Y6 v; B<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 O. t: _, P! d. u' A+ j<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 @8 L2 h' v0 H& l" e0 J" o<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! b* r$ s: v1 C5 \8 L, J4 t! ]) `<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ N' C, G# y' w! a<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% q  s4 n$ f& X$ }- G0 m( {2 O8 H" w<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: ~8 `, A- y5 K. @, {1 n<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# M( S4 ?' ~/ Z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' M; F9 }& ~9 e<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% R/ c  I" U: ]9 }<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, o8 T6 g" ?! M. n9 R7 K<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 V  [" S2 e2 O0 N<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( U5 v' H# N0 ?( B* j. U7 ^<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" F! B0 f- w1 N( l# S" G<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! n* U" M0 ?$ N<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ j! @% ?6 Z! j% E, |1 l* Q4 B9 ^# m<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- V/ i( a4 r( h+ \<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ X4 }  g% _+ v& Y5 S<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 j! \( L& c/ r* ~: ~$ l* W<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 ^7 @# b5 L: S# ~% Z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 e' R+ M# X+ x7 M, U<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- [0 A" E1 n- w2 Y/ E6 b<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 D9 g5 i6 L+ c5 S6 L% w<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! V2 u! ]6 p8 t3 _" R0 r" X& o<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" V4 C8 E3 |5 w( S<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ b+ i; i( c0 e$ c# e<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' T9 y; w9 P1 v! p" A9 E0 ]. n<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) w' G3 `: j2 Z$ k<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

! L. x) [4 P% I6 @6 s# P 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) _' Q3 i% A' S<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>