【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
: o: C. e; d: j1 n2 j! e+ lThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 v* u9 v6 n' @/ y* Y5 mThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& Q4 f# t8 S) H* Y' tThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 l7 p" A1 G/ N8 qEvery other word you utter is love
, q! y+ c# p) K: S9 q* b$ h3 OI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
6 e: C7 Q3 E1 mCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 G. V& D; W7 q8 r' j  x7 Y2 y2 JI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( M2 a# f% C; S' l# P1 pI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 ^$ n% ^3 [" c5 K+ aWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
! h- l( T. o) B/ R# H. MIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% v* z; }3 D3 v- u; N<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 e2 {2 Z# n$ i5 `; Y9 ~<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% ^+ X/ x- @8 _5 M7 [, t<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 N" q: G. Q# g" D$ d* l6 a7 G<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. C- R! J& Z4 y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 B- e' W! `2 T1 {) p6 `$ O<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- w6 K: Q. v" Z4 r2 h<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- q0 _& q  t( C/ A<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, e# j2 ], \3 o( D- K" r" \<P>你无需担心</P>
0 D. R' l( \7 P* u, p# G2 z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 W  r% y( R) O5 ]/ L( e9 k<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, A( I- F% }- {; h  Q$ ?<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! r. N/ J) ^/ n' v/ p<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  y* ?$ G! g5 I9 r5 G# g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 T$ @( m7 c% X2 L7 ]7 y- P<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- \, F7 t3 Z+ r+ Z. H9 H- p% M<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" I4 `, E' R. I: S6 N" w<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. s) z% H  d6 X2 b6 Y) v<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: E0 }5 U( G" ]( x4 l/ b<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
: _; U* j  ^$ h+ Y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ j: X+ h1 ?# S<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% o: e$ O; h' r5 d<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 C  |7 s/ L% R# J8 L' G# E<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% o* L( M0 W3 }. F2 [/ H4 M- S<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. X# y. x' p3 s9 J/ L<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; j8 F, J# h$ L; [' Z" w3 J2 [<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 }' {/ q* X& b" u, m& [$ X<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 d0 M: p: \4 l7 t* C: J5 o2 f<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

6 a; h. b. t$ W& [: q2 k3 p 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& o5 w) o4 s8 G" M# [% R' d<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>