【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
2 T) ?7 ?/ e# p+ L) ?4 w6 l3 `' x4 XThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 b! [9 @) _8 i0 C% x( HWith the moon kissing it every night
( X& z$ m  K1 G. sSeeing the sky content with its love
8 O% ?" `4 N4 x! J) o7 `It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) ~$ _% ]3 J( i% yI love you I love you with all my heart
# h  Z! g; o0 `( s$ F8 bNothing can compare to my love
. S- V+ E; [; Q; h: P* C5 ]Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  l5 E8 l9 H) \+ w) ^; Z* OThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: z5 w, j$ d/ l, X! t% ?I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% J# N6 S% T" G- ~0 P8 y; U+ QI’m still filled with fear
# N6 u# T$ P& u' p' C6 AYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
& B( k3 E( c2 r0 y* }' K6 nI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ A. p1 X5 \& E! iWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 f. |% b) X( R2 P: ~* pRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# H* s3 {$ E, }1 n  B) Z! n<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* E; m& U; `( r" m0 E' M<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ y7 p1 a4 q! @) l8 t' P; T  m<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( w% y" x0 ]4 V<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 ]- {9 p4 L* ~; \$ D: \% x<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& N7 F) w( V1 E3 u<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 e# O: d" H. y7 u- Q5 T; Y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) s# ^* I3 Z% {) j( H8 s' }<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  t: u' l3 y% r: r! z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- K0 A0 K0 y" r6 g- L  Q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( t* l( p! E" ^2 d<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( e+ n& F8 A' |6 z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# R/ q' W6 d: M2 F4 J<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 ?+ u( y/ j+ l( [" t6 ^+ T2 r<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- r! w/ z  {) i" X<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" n+ d9 C, P* B! P) e5 G# b% k1 e<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 S% N! H/ W: m; ~2 f& B<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 V: K+ V8 T9 D: G+ W<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 v- H7 Y& t* R4 z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ M9 V+ y; D+ E$ ?5 @<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 D- C5 |- m- N3 q& J<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 m3 r- X4 ~: Y& p8 D; r+ a<P>I regret not dying</P>
: F+ k1 g9 \# Q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  @1 H" _- V8 a4 R8 P2 _<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! s. v- a* M) `: x( i- N3 V<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* m) Q1 V$ @' J( n; y) C<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; N8 O, @: }3 `6 \) Z% V, Z8 L<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. A5 e! X% @* C6 W, M+ I; L% k; W# C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) i$ P8 ?3 f. u# y+ q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" W( o& X/ ?2 E; U# R; W! |4 x<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ v" K( |6 c  K" C1 e<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& d* x& c2 ]8 F, S<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
1 ~) I8 e4 c. Y+ _* O& n: o  O: H
我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* H' e3 t7 c- L' K- X% i8 h5 q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>