【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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% @6 C4 M5 l3 j; v! w歌词我附在后面。
! t' @3 ?2 z- ?* @4 Y) ^7 DThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: s3 D: r+ n$ _  o1 lWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, ?3 A: {, P5 M* e) N7 B- |It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" L6 B; N) _/ R  B5 LYou needn’t fear anything
$ d. h. e- s) I! ~0 RMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" X- W# \: b" rEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 ?3 g! J4 ]! HNothing can compare to my love
3 A6 g% }) s6 F7 m/ I' M* CCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, e( O; B/ c+ _- R. U6 }The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. v8 A. U( J5 ~" _  RI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* S4 ?$ T% K, gI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. C/ j/ V5 B! P2 L' kI regret not dying
% @- l" Y4 K: v' ?  e  ?I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
$ m- K0 u! a9 i" r( c0 o0 U9 tYour speech can’t even keep up with it
8 b# E( X: Q9 s) V9 N. x- xIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- R# _/ r. p. p6 C* s& `Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 ]7 \/ }/ Y7 u0 \6 S1 o; }  D+ ?<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 I# ]) F, d# q. b9 [' V0 r- e9 V7 f<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 d4 b  ^5 r4 F- |, _& V<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' x: s3 v5 C  M# H1 O; T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* E5 |' ^- U) M( e& U; T<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ Q" ]2 N: _2 R  I2 v% k, Q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# X5 k2 a; {# h5 @8 J/ ]3 G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 `( E8 o! \6 }4 _* J<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ K  ?% ?- |& z( X( G' C<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ }! [6 S& ]2 s" r: m<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 P9 e9 i4 }) d$ T* k<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ n8 h4 k1 O3 f" s! c<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! C$ I' t6 i- L2 N0 g4 H9 d# b<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" R& ]! E$ K* d# l1 W5 r$ `<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, s, }* ^6 y( r0 O- ]<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ ?* \* J- I) ]1 |) ^! E<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) a  z3 U$ Y2 o, E( e<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 l! y, {" l5 L  R0 z. r- Y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, t3 d  @3 Z; s9 L$ i<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 ?/ w) H0 ~9 u2 k4 m<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% i- s$ k6 W: h! y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 ^& a/ V: M3 I2 [  I<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 d; Q1 f# `6 r4 T# o+ H0 u1 p<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% W  D* O3 ~/ P3 X8 S) k<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: l1 H* M) T# t3 C3 y3 u<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 ?9 G9 s+ A! C9 u* K  |<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 I3 D2 p9 S& }, Z& x<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. T0 \1 R. K, I& m$ o1 s<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 d1 g* W5 l4 |4 `3 F<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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1 n& F4 Q% o5 [- g  f) O 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% M, C8 c0 D2 C2 y( n<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>