【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 X  i7 O2 w5 h* Y1 D. \Making the sky glitter like gold,
9 A0 R  \$ y" c) @When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; k$ L- d$ b" e; b4 fThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 n! d. S6 |4 R, ~With the moon kissing it every night
$ u0 N$ ^* w9 I; j0 b2 F/ e; f0 JSeeing the sky content with its love
) H0 Z) `+ O, A$ F2 \9 u. CIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 H" y5 T) C  B4 i4 T2 F: n9 UEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
/ Z/ Y6 t) U7 \  VNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! P7 b1 N% W+ t- uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# K* e; B% z. \  JI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, v4 E% |, I9 _# N8 V! n2 OI’m still filled with fear
; z$ A& |& u6 W2 F( XYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
& g" U8 h3 w6 _+ W8 uI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
+ {; A: T8 v; w" U/ ^* XYour speech can’t even keep up with it
- m. a  R+ |5 L; i) LIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 m& [' Q. V. S1 f) Q' R9 W' bRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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9 _* K+ z* b3 {$ \8 {<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 k* `! F: z% f" |7 |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: w, t6 R# j8 E# t<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, a6 w0 P: ~5 D! e3 q$ P<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 t! P4 A' {( i4 z/ t, s<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& {8 ~! o6 Y# W+ p  _<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 E$ A+ m0 C# y7 E<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 C) s5 W, P& _8 u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ f5 U) S  p$ L5 ~. ]<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# g! g- s( ~0 I" a1 ^$ W<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) z. ^% R1 \/ f<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* x  @# Y5 p+ x/ c8 k! |& {<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# Q( L3 A9 v, }4 b1 t3 W; q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 L7 m  u8 g) `6 d) x' J<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 A# Y4 w/ c& ?) v, c) x<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- _. ]3 c0 P7 f$ T8 C  d+ X<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 _) ~: f6 I4 p# l1 ~' v9 o/ e<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 Y0 p  q4 {, [$ @: s3 p* _+ s<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
. }$ _1 Y) F/ c! `- d<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ v8 T3 Y) i4 L<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 c7 ^% H* L, t  |/ m# \( i<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 m" r- U9 V8 ?# [<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% r$ [, @$ b9 J  l  D+ q$ g<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' y+ R3 P" z0 l$ X/ v, r' S<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. t& A( H1 {# i" ^<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" Y# c, p3 F( F# ^5 k<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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$ ?8 @& I1 F: E  X 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>