【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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: O  v  m# {# K& M; R$ L歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ A! g8 {. ?: p) aMaking the sky glitter like gold,
- s0 F# b0 x. }+ Z: L! k2 nWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. i+ B' w5 m) A: B* XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# s$ C" f0 y1 D: n% dThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
( g: T1 T3 W4 x+ P0 MSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
- [7 J8 x- R( G9 Y5 b6 oCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 U/ [7 I% a( A- r5 XThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 R; P3 r! g' F/ B. iI want so much to see inside your heart
1 y' s$ Y9 {1 C: x* XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
8 ~0 _. t+ D7 H' K' W+ }: u8 S6 ]6 LYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ u5 d- `$ \3 Y, w/ y- Z# G! ~I regret not dying
, d9 t* j+ F$ @8 E0 z9 yI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 C/ Y) P3 B. j+ S$ {6 {With such a tongue as yours,
; |2 [9 N- N$ G. pYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 }# u+ S; |! K! U% B<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& H$ G0 H6 F' K# q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. u- |" `( M1 N: l. ~<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. B/ g+ a; e1 L2 Z! |% X% A' H<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" z4 T$ K. H8 A6 |! c. f<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! P& R. O+ V/ [; a# U" @<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 `( {5 Q+ \0 N/ @<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 S5 W: R: g- u3 x+ o! P<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; i  T2 f* c, j/ {" e$ D9 z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 {5 L# E9 }' \" m( _* Q! E# |- A3 Z5 K<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: Z; ]$ L! g# G# y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ m( ]4 F9 D3 |0 X! I0 n<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ V% p6 I& E: ]6 {, v: m3 t<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 Q2 Q+ e  J; M) I<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ p3 Z+ T' E' Y/ B$ D( x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 Z0 ^( F  K4 K, s: K; p# I<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 S1 r7 q* p$ D# D( E1 {<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& w7 W! a% ]& F6 Z. K; h- h<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 S- h; \+ @: m, b8 c% G; O: k<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: \! G( H" B: }& \2 s  G% g# g: A<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ ]  s( y9 C; |4 T" L- f- J<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' v" l0 @# Y3 j1 {( ^* Y; Q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 f: @" N/ K, \$ [6 c<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 v' Z) F' \2 T9 a0 x# z3 S4 R7 r<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 R, R8 {$ q! }/ d, m  W<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  C, U/ a3 G! M<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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2 D2 {6 D- a1 O) m3 K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 C" R& X+ U0 f* X8 _<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>