【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
0 X& f: o7 p5 n4 z5 L1 C* v5 LThe moonlight is shining brightly,
3 F( |9 m# S! p8 }Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 d1 S3 Q) w3 Y5 GThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 N9 S( W! J" Y* d8 z2 I3 F* \With the moon kissing it every night
+ h* q! b3 f2 B, J& o5 t( y9 }5 ~5 YSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 z% ~8 e7 H% b+ h3 QYou needn’t fear anything
  S4 X% F# {6 G& yMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 W& p( o' J, H$ ZEvery other word you utter is love
- h2 h4 J8 \" h# R4 vI really want to know just how much you love me
( O9 {4 \9 y4 L* H1 e4 T2 bI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) E4 Q7 C9 x1 P6 f: x* KI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ s" B5 E' p' e- nI’m still filled with fear
  r9 y' ^4 n- ?" i$ E0 JYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) H9 J: `3 d% ~I regret not dying
. U1 N" g( v7 T7 }/ H) T# {( U$ DI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
& f2 R; g9 k9 z" S6 zYour speech can’t even keep up with it
) x! C/ ~; N, H  xIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 P' o* q! V% C- Y: O<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ e$ g- w7 H# ?. t2 {<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 P7 u8 K( e5 O/ D4 H" J$ d<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  R& s+ ?8 }4 i0 `. g& e4 C<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  w) G2 r8 [5 n; q# w% b<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! P3 Y% Y* @4 i* H- e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* ~% v* q0 X' U3 X7 I<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) z  E# j8 D6 [<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% F/ s4 i+ k& g% A& l<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) E) v1 s, f. E: Y& m) ^0 f9 b<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; U- X) C( g' P! L8 j, U<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" ], K! L) b( P1 R$ @0 {. p<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( O4 L! ]- z" B5 O3 [( t% o$ v6 x2 {<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( x( }' s1 d3 q! L% u: I- \<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( W2 R7 [* w0 ]  U: W<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 z9 H/ D' N8 `2 E9 ^( g2 F<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( e8 \0 _, J1 t1 D+ y% Z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 c4 a. o4 D& g8 a& `4 h<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 Q/ j1 p) h+ h( S' \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ E, ~7 X2 e; _; ~0 i% ?  Q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. L$ o. d7 M; X# r4 y) D& _- s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 U. Z* H; ~" d, ]+ V<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, g, Y  f! d7 O3 T1 T<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ k! D$ N, Y8 u( v; j* y- Y8 X  N<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( r5 l+ k8 g5 b9 i8 U2 r& X<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( \7 ?6 _$ S1 o: r  C8 W9 I4 S<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: Z. ~* ^2 X% y( @$ q/ l# C) [<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& Z) B9 @! z# V0 n" @: D<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- N' H+ W$ H7 W<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  J8 T' J- u: f/ o! P<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ A# t" _2 y- q# D/ ~/ [7 `# E0 `<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, l6 r  j; D$ Y8 Q0 {<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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( c. y2 s) l" u& g* ?1 _) r 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>