【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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* x/ d+ Z# E# ]2 O- ^1 I* Z歌词我附在后面。
- F& z$ }# _: QThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 J/ }! r, q- d9 K" P; t( \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% M' t# ~# j" H( q* }The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 g" I9 Y! L# oYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" k6 |" _) A+ ^; H  Z! vEvery other word you utter is love
% F6 H* u& {3 |; e! uI really want to know just how much you love me
8 O, \  \+ x& k5 uI love you I love you with all my heart
1 a8 B& f3 S8 ~Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 V9 F; g3 B" z5 e% Q/ oI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 f- P! H2 k' s0 l% O4 sI’m still filled with fear
( c7 a& W; K" [0 E& eYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 O# f  w0 V8 R. Q: k* A' XI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" a4 h$ y% L2 ?) pRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! [# r- M- Z' t! W- V<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% a! o$ ?1 R3 J1 @0 K8 [<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ {# T) K. r. j/ O/ p, V  C2 Y' g9 r<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. S) m6 {* \3 [+ s) S- ^$ i<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 p3 h% }7 i" Z. m! w2 x( S# _; _<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 r9 h0 n9 `; Q9 J<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, ^) ~& W0 U7 X<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- g. u/ v0 S1 |& I8 k8 }<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ E- V' |0 w6 @) l<P>你无需担心</P>
" C' s5 G! X& {6 e! K  S. W0 l<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. |; j" \. P. X: \) z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ I1 f0 `# I! _$ L6 M<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ t# z1 j, \' s2 M" i6 l<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" H$ b# @; S9 c  d<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( D- n! ]3 @* G5 r3 u- z$ A+ P# y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 h9 F! f  _- t. @<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ C/ c. G' x1 s5 e" l+ U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  m3 J; ~7 q8 E& v<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, G6 q0 N  p1 `. g, T<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 H# l! g5 H* R6 A* v<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ p. I$ {: y) ?4 X) p4 k<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: a! W# j' D; N1 u) \1 K2 U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) ?% b: H5 I4 \9 a. [3 u<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 I# _. Z/ N% N! Z& g! w" o<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* r1 M# f* v9 |$ M' t- e<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 X1 l7 V5 j0 I2 ^<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>