【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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) z; G4 d/ W" p" S2 S, z6 j歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" `* W# o% Q2 `+ ]# ?& x5 x! sThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 j5 J7 L6 x& R7 {: p7 t% AWith the moon kissing it every night
! h4 n9 l. X& s4 bSeeing the sky content with its love
" _0 l& `, X' _0 M$ g& b* pIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 W+ q2 A% Y3 O  IMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! d. A7 G) r8 Y9 E. ~8 \( l/ MEvery other word you utter is love
7 ^3 P" V/ W9 D" LI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, [! C0 ]) a" H$ Z+ u( y2 cNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# Q' M. i& A% y0 K, H1 K9 TThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
( O9 Q& p" j6 X( U2 g% ^I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( A: ?3 V% r% B1 LI regret not dying
5 Y9 Y( d5 \! I; R( J6 u6 ?6 c% mI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: X  O) X4 h0 B# k1 l! r<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ ^6 w" C5 Q. ~" S  h0 |<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ ]& W) s: d' @5 N  B<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! F5 j7 m+ B; ?# l<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( f" l3 u+ t. i& Z- s8 S  q4 m% d$ ~<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  E' A9 t! O" ?% ]8 B<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( ^: g- I" }8 |' t3 _<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 V( \* ]) m0 `' X! ^2 Z" _% y  E1 ~<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' c+ j/ w9 I& Y2 B/ J  U# E<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
  ]9 G6 e6 `* \. {<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 `$ z, U" w! U9 g- A1 S<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ J5 L* {/ z, y: e& v& J, X1 K<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& ~/ z4 C8 s9 p! o<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& o$ o- F" \2 N% F: [: L% ^% S! D* _<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) |, G+ C5 X' I4 H  n" C( G; Y( t<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 w3 B4 U+ A) C<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' ], W- [6 a. G4 `  |) f1 L<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: G$ f) n3 v; k& ^! v7 |6 x; y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! D. n1 v+ I$ G- o<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- ]4 o1 L9 @9 W" c0 z+ s<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) \9 k9 T4 Z6 s9 _; z+ V6 O9 l<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; I4 l3 [. z& H7 W. y3 K$ e% M<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ A6 e3 V2 A# b% Q: D+ r2 B; d<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% q! v5 `: [$ s- o6 q) E$ K; ]<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* K8 r" I' u* I% G% R+ `<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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( B" j: w- `4 G/ g我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 Z' k  ]; A! J2 h6 ~+ S<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>