【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
! z# h, g( V! R/ ?% mThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# C0 R5 G/ E  M( v1 }8 l5 tThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
  K: y! L2 v2 U- z( ^Seeing the sky content with its love
8 p  X3 C5 D$ J! q' O/ j- \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* D# O* `/ w2 Z) y: t& L5 xMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, d: B  Y* h( cI love you I love you with all my heart
; j  j( [7 H- |; MNothing can compare to my love
. k6 [6 [& }0 O$ lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: b# H' U/ \8 [2 e2 {) s: u% Q6 HThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# [0 q6 F. ?. _1 P4 p3 wI’m still filled with fear
4 Q3 a6 i( b8 n$ r9 J" _' ?Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% M  X1 o3 C  Z9 h0 V4 |) R; tI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ Z3 {4 P) y2 P, B  v/ w$ l! y* PWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
* r- }0 J" v9 M7 J4 O, QIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% w: X* j0 q" i: y/ ]2 M0 }Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! q3 d0 ?6 N5 a* ]9 P<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& c- B2 ?# \5 a  n: Q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" ?  M2 J! C5 @2 h<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- d: p3 |9 l' c4 B) d9 e; d: f<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! E& Y* G! t( [. j) Z, o3 q/ D<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 ]1 A9 x, M7 K8 F1 y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 M  z1 m, x  A  Y/ ?<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- A% q) N0 [8 I' ^$ o3 J<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ T5 w& b7 M* z- j1 L5 ^<P>你无需担心</P>
2 P3 X% L! J; T6 ~7 M2 j- d: D<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 D# C  Y1 }0 p. ~! t0 r3 z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* R8 h2 l$ x2 t<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; \$ @( ?# B% u2 w5 p# G<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& e% j7 O4 |5 ~$ W0 B<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 n6 c2 L/ \0 q: P<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 h# r5 \% a, Y1 m' X<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# F+ ?4 F- p0 b3 _3 v% y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ s4 ?/ U8 @4 W) _<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 |1 k& b0 `$ c' d& R, ]<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ o% A* \( d, ^4 t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 d0 w3 B/ u. A# r) a6 r& j<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( T' B  _2 c9 c1 z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: r3 }  x- P) o+ t  @9 F6 y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 k  q  |9 U7 ^: K( x: }& n6 _) ~<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, z+ P" ]" v0 r: ]: `<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: d) a) A6 E- `) [! }# Q/ a6 X, j<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 R, g3 [' H% X<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 m/ F- m7 U% B" f: u" q8 A<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 P2 u4 u; G/ n' |<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# `5 O) k) r# t6 p6 g<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- F9 F7 A" b( W6 l3 |' @) e3 w; t<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 ^1 [2 O- m3 x/ u+ h" w<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; N9 b8 S5 G, V& [- f( n' ~<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 E4 I# v0 S$ D1 t! h) w<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, p9 {, y5 v" |5 ^: }/ b<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>