【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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  {) t3 \2 u9 P歌词我附在后面。
: `( \5 I8 T4 _" K2 S- [The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
' j$ C* m2 V* q0 V- a8 [6 aWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. V: @# ^) m5 H0 }" o$ }# kThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* i- t9 C9 K7 p8 v" s* x6 eEvery other word you utter is love
( P4 g9 c5 A& e" m0 t9 [2 M: {4 _$ v. uI really want to know just how much you love me
4 g! A, d/ O; T# t2 QI love you I love you with all my heart
+ p( l7 X! Z+ E4 M9 [' r$ B( ANothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 l* ]* N  n" l. q' gThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) d( B$ _9 v9 y+ R  KI’m still filled with fear
: ^: b8 G8 L* c! P1 V( ?8 z8 XYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
8 u. Y+ d" @- X; TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ M3 g; U$ Y+ i4 i; w/ x+ A<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 C: d9 x& ^8 u! c8 u# i; Y6 ^6 F<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 A' n4 |% o! [7 @# G9 E4 L<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) |( h7 l1 n* i9 }8 l! U+ N( i+ l<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" R/ M  B3 P" Z( }2 p4 w9 ~( P/ V3 c<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; ^5 t8 p/ s3 x2 }) P7 r; |<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 p+ C# p/ b$ {. m( W. s2 @<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 _% p, B' g. ]7 X<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' q+ c$ t  n1 B5 l* A<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ d! z* D  V$ h( }* N6 I# X<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' Q1 q/ P: \$ ?. W<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# w; n. B0 P6 p2 i5 H: b- P9 E1 w<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! I2 {% b# j) D1 p& Q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
! b6 Q- {4 q  _1 N7 L) B8 D/ u. @<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 H% R6 ?/ |1 n4 n6 T- p<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- }) l* b- e" u; M<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- E+ R( E: o/ i7 X: ?) g% T<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 ?, R: R) c4 @' Q# R; W" B( I# i<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( S+ B  R  M0 L<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 C3 e8 D( T) Q) G( p9 W<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  X# |+ L- F9 o* l5 W<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>