【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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- c* k5 s* m; Q  m) N歌词我附在后面。
7 h) s" O( }0 j0 \9 r" SThe moonlight is shining brightly,
+ k2 a& K& @1 J: z; f$ V  DMaking the sky glitter like gold,
+ `% t1 F" T: q- uWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; w5 ^/ |6 K6 wThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
. H. ]. G' d1 _5 F. i' n: nSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
3 c3 U+ N" ^; J* z' L+ ?; \  xMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 s/ X, [' F) f5 MEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% v* _6 k# f# D  z- u( XI love you I love you with all my heart
7 e2 v# l4 T/ r1 G5 iNothing can compare to my love
$ f0 u- m9 E1 z- S4 b  M4 U: cCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
+ r4 |# S, n4 u+ D1 sI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
& q, v% X% V( u, r. g( _I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, V  j/ F" S6 D, }% }With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 o; ~8 ~- ^) x) u. C<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 Z; j. c9 F- j" A! q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! Y* Y  C' q) q* _" F4 G* h4 l1 \<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 T; F4 h6 I% b9 n4 i# y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. ~. e, O) `$ k<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ i: D; L& F+ }9 F<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 y9 P: q6 \) m7 ~2 }/ I& q; O<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) D" O& Z' o+ _7 @5 ?3 a0 G' A  J: B4 W<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) {0 H- Z- d' \- O: I9 y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- K0 y1 [1 t0 L/ G<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 U1 n1 E4 {: ~, B4 z3 |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 A( s8 y7 O5 E9 L0 D/ U) {  S<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* _4 J! U: c) [: M6 e<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  Z" u  Q- y" w' u/ e; [1 H( M% g: q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* ?: h( B) p% r- s# t0 ]<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# h9 G. a! u* A, `. r: I# U<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# M8 X: ~* v! j: Q4 N; U# a<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ v) i6 t7 g' w$ p  p9 F* b<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ k' g  P( }' y: U6 T5 n<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 e8 n$ Y3 v- R- y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  w; {" ^3 F! |/ n1 F( g<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ [0 v8 S/ B1 @" @" Q1 f<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 \; g5 l1 s. r  A5 |2 ]8 Z; c# d<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* X* |% E0 o5 t6 u. {, I9 \<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. I/ u8 p5 ?9 R! X, D<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) Y( h; E9 o* W; n<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' b, u( Y5 v% D9 q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 Y8 a; C$ l+ {% N6 e<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  F# q# K' o, ?. K) {: c% ]5 Y% h<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# o  w5 H  w6 ^$ E5 [<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) N$ A* c0 g2 {& H4 j. ?<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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2 D( C* t9 U% `1 J7 H; B4 t$ ^ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; N# \( k8 v& R: M( D% K8 C# j. Z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>