【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
& K3 O' S& D5 |$ J; |7 T$ zThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 [# _& L8 \% l: EWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 {3 ?, E0 k" Q5 ~7 ~& HThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ x/ t& x0 o2 O2 ~2 S+ x/ E3 m5 tThe sky is happy down to its soul
  s/ d; m1 d9 EWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
3 D" e9 z7 j/ k' @% VIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 N5 z) e( t$ R. \You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: e! Y; I7 H/ l4 REvery other word you utter is love
+ k( ?6 z: X) hI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
& [0 S% p& Y9 I3 oNothing can compare to my love
8 ]. Q" F% t% F) n7 ^4 b2 LCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ x3 h" {" L# i$ R% V* lI want so much to see inside your heart
  _2 [$ P8 {2 R" KI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 K# `0 W: A4 W! J& q( a" YI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
4 `$ m  j3 z. S* G" g, \Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: o8 ]1 q4 ?1 z& ]4 H# OIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. V) G0 |1 S4 z/ d# Q6 x3 o<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" \/ O4 c2 }* v, A  `2 a* W! q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* p) F4 j9 s1 Y! f; _6 w/ J<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% {$ T$ h8 X" L<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: [$ ~2 E7 D. _, F+ Q& C<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 D1 [0 |+ i1 e" _1 z; a# G<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  u; [- U( r, ]<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 c# n9 B/ |% D- t7 B9 g<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 [- Q: R. P1 D. O) D<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  o" P& C. F( F, X9 S- V% e. n<P>你无需担心</P>
0 c' U  k0 e- [3 m<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 A) ^' A2 E; ~) h<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. o  r/ `) k+ F1 e% U# ]<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! ^) ^; k7 ^8 N! S/ s2 T<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# y+ z+ |. y/ F* R1 G( t<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! a! u2 x: i+ c( L# U2 c<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# n# n- u" n+ T' p  d) m4 p6 O<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! v# r' g" J9 N0 y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 F4 y+ l) P7 R4 Y% h7 ~<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 F" F5 c, D; v; w3 F# `7 U7 Y- M<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) @5 C7 f9 f  ~- S$ ^<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 m. M) M1 a) ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. ^6 @( U1 o1 i/ L. Z" q5 D<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: {; c6 x$ z; S+ ^. O: G/ w! f: Y- H<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- L  i2 J1 m2 o3 i! J9 ^8 H- t<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! ^0 p" S; }0 W; W4 _5 L1 ^+ D<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 P* @2 O) f8 E* S3 C3 M- R<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>