【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  P, ^2 \* ~% i8 O$ p0 k& A# D) zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 C: z/ [/ ?$ {, B- wThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% ^1 Q/ t" ^  g& E$ w' oIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# \# C3 ~6 `9 E2 H8 v: UYou needn’t fear anything
% I+ P$ n: j" w+ _2 l1 X: {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 k  c+ o+ t6 n  G* CEvery other word you utter is love
! B3 J/ D+ B1 X. t9 D: ?) ]1 MI really want to know just how much you love me
- I9 j. c% r% x5 DI love you I love you with all my heart
9 L) {8 v- G2 W1 Y2 Z" |Nothing can compare to my love
+ ]) v4 F0 P7 y% |% I- sCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 M8 [, R0 H  ~4 k* S! @* p7 s7 ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
# R9 N+ h4 ^" h4 n$ N2 _I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ T" l/ L" D" d7 U+ [I’m still filled with fear
$ N& H- G  H) @1 G* X4 w3 ?4 c9 c& tYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
& A( p* x6 q# s. Q- Q# dI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! G! k* ]" y9 d% t3 f3 g/ r$ {5 CWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

0 J, d4 `! a  u- ?<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: _& g5 M: V) j# T% O, ^/ |+ q5 \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ ]+ x3 T& j  S9 k0 q; [$ h<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& P" L! E# S0 e<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  A% }. E; S' \- s- @7 A<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ L! [- |. h5 q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& c+ D+ `7 d0 {* m/ u" D<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" B( H( U% S+ H  @- N) b<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& G2 {5 f1 U0 h. b<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; \" R3 [" V* X, Q6 x3 {<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 \( a' j' Y: i. M/ b/ g  o<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( Q( B3 {  R  y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! A: u9 I" j, @<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; E' g, w  Q+ W<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# V+ `1 i' Z: i% G9 u/ T<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 a, ~8 }7 L3 T# K: d- h4 j<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: i6 X8 U, s5 E' G- B9 q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 e% h& }1 h2 ^9 Q% x. U9 N<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' Z/ Q( l* P  W3 S<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  _8 a9 N. x% W1 D  @/ [<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, {! V- n  r- c. c; C, K<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: Q. ]8 D( }7 X" A2 [( I  m<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 Q, M0 @& t6 c, @0 D+ @<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
* t6 l3 ?) E  Q& m4 V
/ Y; `! F& V4 ]我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>