【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' S1 z5 `  t# [+ KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ x  F" h+ @  a: F( nThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 B3 w( j6 a" c1 K6 |Seeing the sky content with its love
: e6 p; h, O4 B4 `6 I# @It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 E1 }: k) H2 N) R  q. zMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 k& D; U1 a  q1 p$ V+ CEvery other word you utter is love
& T; D$ ~' s, H" V! |I really want to know just how much you love me
7 R4 }4 ~: O" o. b- f% [I love you I love you with all my heart
2 L, |! L" B1 i# R+ W. dNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; Y* D. N' g0 V( [The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 a# z) e1 p7 _  ]- `5 c8 GI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 ?' @. b4 b; @2 _1 F: e; B2 ~6 B' E# AYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ x: W5 G. x( `; G* M. ^I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 D, y" k; w* L, [- j6 LWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 I5 F- v8 n+ o0 P: D# iIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 j. ~/ V3 B6 S<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ z/ x. X8 C; p4 D6 b3 o* K% s<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- F1 z/ c* l$ S: l- \% V) z+ m3 A* |( L<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% L: F6 K. W. Z0 f! ^. i; D<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 c* X. Y9 n& Q, F$ x3 t  V5 O) q8 S<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ c- ~. J/ T/ X9 @& W. i$ w* F<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  l% u  `* }/ Y7 p<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ d! ?% O  X" ^9 P! e* f<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! g- F2 V" d, `: y2 F% a7 s+ T<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 K5 ]; n8 ~% f& A) P+ c<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 I5 o$ c. x/ P( n1 W<P>你无需担心</P>
- ^/ b. h$ A2 _1 }! W( B. w6 G<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* K5 d$ X9 T7 j; g0 K3 M5 D<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* x7 N7 \' ^! n7 n; Q6 J1 E8 ^9 ~<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 D, X$ Y: M) n' i& O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, V$ x" l  M% e; g; W; k<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 r# G0 m, n3 [: i/ X4 f/ b+ C4 R& a<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: P- B6 @' o7 a3 Z1 C- P4 N: @<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 j  _1 ]+ ~" Q6 c9 O<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, d! t! K' v" t) i* a<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 \& U, n  P( H  \  N! {<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" _0 [* n0 Z+ @<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ n& u' g' G$ l6 N! W. E<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 E% c. G2 f' g$ H4 x' F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- l0 q1 y3 p" p; P. m& V9 E+ H<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 w8 r8 K, s/ W  M! _<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 `" T+ @3 c) w2 e" s' U<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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: Q4 u, \$ E, `2 K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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