【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 o9 x8 E' p8 ?* ?, HThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 b! T. S8 r+ z/ _$ bWith the moon kissing it every night
7 ~" F1 C% }; A: ~Seeing the sky content with its love
3 Z3 \, R$ A. c' @+ OIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
  \& \. O$ Y* Y% }* d, wMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% W( K6 S8 C8 P5 a$ ]  PEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
( c* k4 c7 a4 s. d  N& S5 NI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
7 d( L$ c) e, l( L- b1 mCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" ?3 F% l3 |- o: SThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# u8 a( G5 S% R. h( w! {Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: T! g; [- S9 @% r: F3 e<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, [* q& i! D) ~* e<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 h% ^  {4 K3 l$ t<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: R4 R: X$ n4 P# ?2 @' t$ Q$ \<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 p8 Z) }* V+ C9 r" R<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ N3 Q$ E2 F% G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 T, M0 d& u" f* C6 x  V<P>你无需担心</P>
" Z$ W9 {6 w/ b: Z0 k% k<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 y0 i1 Z) |# b' G' X<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 o. J; r: n$ R- U  x% l/ z' D<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 f. [0 @1 c5 T0 X<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ M3 Q+ U) h. p% b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 o& |* c6 \4 O9 ]& s4 Y  y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 @8 k. n: w, g4 W<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" ?: Y7 M: a1 _/ y, X' ~<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 x" N4 }" N$ R5 ?& u, \; W<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 w5 W8 J' j; u& a7 I6 A+ ^$ o' g<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 }4 n/ b0 k2 h( T0 s7 c- b) R<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' M2 ]6 Z' W, v+ N# s2 p<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* g# {' q4 m: F" m) }$ p<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ i4 I& k' Q3 `& T3 x5 V1 m: M2 A<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 V4 T! i/ M0 q6 W" J$ J* j- k- M4 p<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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4 u) e9 U4 F7 X 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>