【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" P' x, D/ j/ t' ]3 BThe sky is happy down to its soul
9 W. y- p$ ?! VWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
! ~( ]3 s- c+ J3 P* E8 hMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
0 {* B# r/ R7 z- i! [5 ~! A/ t# p, K- gI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 L& \: X& s9 T( BNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' p; \3 ^" [& @( p. y! uI want so much to see inside your heart
! K. }+ f7 J7 T! O  n4 P6 ZI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  n6 L. h6 A; G: O. e2 T/ tI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
/ v; T: j$ e" ]. J5 m: u& bI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 H5 Z8 K1 q& ]3 a3 GIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

" v- D. {) H; d4 V4 ?<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 }: N$ h. \0 Z4 P<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ M2 Q% ^. e) k<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 e. n6 ]/ O* e) j' C/ x8 c) j' S$ t<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. Q" }2 {: q4 q0 `  y/ q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ `" X8 `, N- \  F3 a<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 A2 N" X9 D% I4 W+ z$ u& H& _) @: o<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. |6 C) {& s+ F<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 k/ x3 @9 H& |8 s: @  K; H) O<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ F8 c" y8 A0 G" @( |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: C9 l! }. o) p. [8 K<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 M# }( W# A% ]: }' X' m) c7 L<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# q! Z0 b( c3 q% \<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' _) H, ^+ N, f8 d  T- b+ C+ `<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' _* m' }5 }8 w; x2 I<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 N  a+ A" j+ h! O, v4 K% E<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% s8 @! M5 g& @, t<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; O9 Y" ]7 u3 o5 Q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 L; ?- w5 d. E2 Y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& X6 ?4 Y' N* b# O+ _. F<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; P9 I4 H6 \! P& B. M" {& [<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 G3 ^  G5 C1 {% m1 o. C  l<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ Y; q- [. c" {  S3 J% E0 h5 C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 K  f1 y( s3 g( @# j<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 o8 }4 m+ E* t* ~, ?<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ E- r$ c% N! {( D# o$ \<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 G+ O% B8 v4 u9 E  _8 r0 x: V. l! r<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( z- _# M2 q( m, w# K<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ O2 ^, {* T# p( ?<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 E1 x+ O* }# ^5 w+ j<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* G/ G0 w" l: p5 V' k% |' \# `<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

* r3 ]6 [  m5 _& S! l我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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