【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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, R7 ?# _* T5 J# u! H6 Y歌词我附在后面。
% I& n! k# ^; K' `! hThe moonlight is shining brightly,
: s4 b6 o+ n( `8 AMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: q) Z6 N) u! T( w' KWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, U- D" `( w% j5 r- ?You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 U& |/ c. {/ h& A- g" |I’m still filled with fear
* ^7 l2 \, ?% G7 T7 z# U& q6 zYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* Z3 e8 i6 @5 l- T: iI regret not dying
& I* ^6 z0 N) O' \& }I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 Q3 q& v2 Z% u$ C5 AIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" J5 F+ `1 ^; l+ nRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ ?7 t7 l$ z% V" @% W2 E9 D<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* j* ]! \9 P* m% Q" b+ y/ j3 j% M<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; s, Z; f% B* M7 w* s4 ~+ r<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: j- K5 n9 O9 R<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; f8 D% ?2 z3 C) ?) p<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 K6 ?8 z7 K, A3 P<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ o6 a% u5 v+ M& ^<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ H+ e, o) _& m4 I<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 I0 ]9 O' r& |, z  |, Y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 s5 Q4 i$ g. A& Q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. o  ~$ s; \/ V6 K4 h<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. `  S' V  n' {* L' F<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 h  z1 r. A4 @<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, ~  D" J8 f- N* h  E) R; H<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 W+ {7 N- X" N$ a- H<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% N! U/ r9 O: D<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 G" E8 z" M0 b+ z" Q: p9 S+ L<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- U/ Q# u5 ^4 \9 s+ B& l<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* l7 g7 |( K4 V% P8 N7 }8 I! s  P/ G<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. a$ ]9 y  W# F2 n1 }<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 N) F% Y; `' `; i$ ^- N<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  R4 J$ T$ M& B' m& B3 M/ }7 K2 A; m<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ U; Q1 J! J6 @( Y  O( p, x<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* G+ C+ g9 R7 [- l' J, M<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
: @& _* x- [# ], _<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* G0 x* Z% B% W. I' E' }& j' Z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; P% G9 n0 k3 ~<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 g0 j$ J& ?  D( D( G" a/ l) W! _; C<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: S0 M- p* |9 N: J  H6 N8 z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. p9 A3 b( V6 b<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

& y% K1 q8 \; i6 k& p' l 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* _# K8 g* i9 K3 A  j<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>