【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 o8 R* O8 q" U0 k% p0 F歌词我附在后面。
! L; p  J& h3 [: E. z; I* FThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
8 ?4 O& {! _4 ZWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
" m- n6 \4 C$ N: PWith the moon kissing it every night
" e# T9 z0 \3 X" x- ~) E% KSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 {) t1 \/ S/ i2 `' IMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
. p2 {2 X& E0 }+ p2 S# {2 BI love you I love you with all my heart
7 ~! R6 M* W, W9 p3 A4 SNothing can compare to my love
* H: X" t& {  t# o7 y0 OCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ c  E3 i9 O/ P5 |4 j' m% {+ V' }I want so much to see inside your heart
. n- i8 n) F6 z! A# n% @& l% EI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- B, o8 C( q7 u8 |Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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7 l6 y  }" G4 W' f- K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 O9 p  n' X: Q+ Y+ D7 |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' e; e( l2 V( k1 U* M- n<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 {1 F8 F+ Z* E$ M0 Z, e1 d$ [<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* z, m3 @) T6 i. O4 k<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 }/ d$ a# q0 Y6 \$ f! ~5 Q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 s3 b) W( k: c# _5 Z! v<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! _6 k- z! x7 R3 _, a7 j6 K! A$ W<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( s. z* w# t) v; ^5 Y4 R<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- J* E4 L7 H9 w* g9 i3 D<P>你无需担心</P>
2 A% f1 \& k  g5 V( F/ u! S/ R# A# _<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ d. E6 ?, \. Q# @1 m2 Y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% b% v# ]2 n0 D! E$ R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- B7 a) I+ }( }<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 O; y+ b" _# M, s3 I8 f% `<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; c; ^+ ^$ L9 t+ q9 Z- t<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ \0 g0 i& X& Q! m/ H  J/ W<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) @) W7 [# \: P+ y" z( y! S  q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ I7 y! S, M. @& o2 z3 p( T<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  Z1 H. I. G  F. P: S; p! P2 |, g<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) L. |4 y) H% V6 p<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 l- G; r2 {" ]/ U<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. T$ G3 C: o! B! \2 j/ l<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 g: v! R* t8 I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 z% C; g0 X, B5 u<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 |6 g( d8 f! |4 y* I# u4 j<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 ?  i5 a' e* R: i2 p<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: r' A0 F* s2 h; b) F. r<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 L) ^8 Z" E2 O) }# C! x" O" j<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ n  K0 o8 L# t+ J0 T$ E8 @/ u8 o' e<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 b% V# e3 g/ i) @' t1 N<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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- E, ]5 B0 j2 W; ?$ l我请你剖开它
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9 Y: H" i; S& ]/ z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 b2 x9 h: T% ]<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>