【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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/ q- A/ c- v7 s" m* ]歌词我附在后面。
0 R/ A% L- p% c5 TThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& f1 F/ h1 ]- K8 p/ R/ G/ s; g7 MWith the moon kissing it every night
$ D# ]: k# I& f+ KSeeing the sky content with its love
# p1 C# j' `6 ~( z* B' G; ~# U7 cIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 D! n2 V) T  K4 S& k; F* SYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* t+ d# x  a% y5 x- {2 |Every other word you utter is love
/ |0 H* F, P* [  @# n" @( v# a$ bI really want to know just how much you love me
! V8 ?* x# U4 A' B8 vI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 c1 K: m; r$ ~0 cCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 F- o: {7 N9 q  oI want so much to see inside your heart
  b( n& m- m" _, eI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 G$ U- ^2 e# l. P+ kI’m still filled with fear
6 d2 X" I% n4 ~! D+ D! O7 u$ @2 rYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
7 ?) o6 B' z& n5 H% D( R) hI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 @- S+ N; k3 n; K/ ]* uWith such a tongue as yours,
5 i+ i/ y0 w5 e0 E8 v9 ?Your speech can’t even keep up with it
+ b$ Y8 w2 L9 l7 @& @If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& I; M. [3 R% s, I0 G& {Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ _( O. _& n, v8 p<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 n* ?* ?1 d0 w' W, Y4 S1 A<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 y# D" E9 r- Y- p' f<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 a6 \9 ?, P* j5 |<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& q: ?! w4 b8 i  @/ B<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: r; W% h7 }8 a; |& T* ^' k<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 q) L% g& e& I( S, w2 Y$ _7 G0 `9 [<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* H. M. u& M  \" {8 m# u# }5 b2 ~<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! l7 s/ x' W' b% Y, q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 L% Q5 I1 x* o; T/ E1 l" X/ g<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 S& z! _5 [: k<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; {/ b8 J: t9 r, [3 i& R) |/ S<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
2 a* t; g9 Y( Q- X- p! O2 y" L7 j8 t<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 r* ?2 D# R$ A6 _<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ ~9 s9 q* B7 k, P2 |" O<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ h) Z9 c1 A2 ]$ W6 ^<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 p  F2 v7 S* m4 t  V<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) u% [+ e/ U" f/ u+ \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ ~& |" J# k% x5 q+ z1 @<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' @+ o: x9 d6 A/ ^<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) D3 B* F; M2 s1 I/ k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, ^$ k8 k. r+ V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 e5 \/ f* h$ ~$ r<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" S* g) e5 K! E5 J<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 o# o1 ?. [& W% y& x$ ]* Q<P>I regret not dying</P>
, K, I+ O" E- R0 l/ d<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ [1 v. A" M( b+ J0 J& ~<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: g* E1 q9 {7 P8 p9 _<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( v8 T$ }& R3 P* W0 m% O0 {' c) f) ~( C<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, t. X+ N7 a3 h<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

& W: \$ J3 Q1 T7 y0 S 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>