【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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  H+ ?. @  ^. Z6 @; sThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 e/ C% M1 _2 L9 b  }# j* M3 xWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. m4 V% A* G) B0 i/ [  a& SThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
8 M' S( A0 K0 v7 A: {It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 T0 F& Q2 K- t) m: e0 hEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) \0 Q$ {* y; T' X# |3 H# GI love you I love you with all my heart
9 z% C1 b- d  R  ^( U" WNothing can compare to my love
& f2 M2 b/ i' ^) B6 ?' x4 P( M% qCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 l% ?0 P9 Q' a& v7 fThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: W. i2 l! O4 \$ eI want so much to see inside your heart
  j" A' [& b" p2 O& JI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 r: D$ R% k$ w7 d2 r" X" Q7 C' VI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' _, T% _5 U# }7 j( e& oWith such a tongue as yours,
( `9 b8 }% U$ a. E* _; NYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! |4 U" o6 z: Y' FRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ a8 S4 j5 I3 i/ u<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 M7 i/ T% d( u0 O) h( K<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( _6 R/ B# c- O<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ x+ L1 U5 N1 G8 p7 W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 X. @7 J7 Q9 m<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! Y; s& j9 u7 h# b<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# q/ y9 h$ o! G' Q) n<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 T: k/ P5 u6 ?4 P  \& T<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
+ I& |6 L+ I) r( _. Z2 n<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% j8 E- W% S4 B, [3 G<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: e9 S& j0 O% D4 t; o, `2 g% y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 Y/ C. v, @3 q2 l1 {<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' t7 s, p) I" [1 g$ R' W" z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 W, w! P9 d# W# l  |<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 M& F8 Y. p" x+ T1 I9 M<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" s/ h9 s; w: h4 J5 f! R5 c<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 p# c( U. S2 [' j# `9 O6 N<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 |1 T9 |+ n! F( I- j% C. [1 \% L9 b<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ Z  }) j, a5 `" T6 |4 ^<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 c1 @5 x5 x8 N% ~$ I3 k* t) T- ~# h<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 O8 {9 n7 f8 n8 n7 K<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 g/ t9 a: t. i8 C- R. z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 j, R& Y. j8 z: p4 Q$ e6 d0 I( S<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 Z. X1 g; a6 F1 a( {7 @<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% l; T1 d, y. a3 W. O. O6 o; R7 }7 [<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

/ F4 a$ }$ M: F 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 Y' \. O7 V* H# z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>