【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 Q3 H: y' j4 S1 D& `, \歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
) t; Y8 N# V5 a, \& u- bMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; u, f7 W; f/ H* k# AWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
5 L3 w# |! }1 e# W. I8 l) j$ M$ |It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
, \3 R9 r5 q: L0 n) h' mMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
& A. u# _) k' r2 ^2 Y2 mNothing can compare to my love
# Q/ C; m0 N& U, f  f( }6 rCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) {, [: D- u( _- ?* WThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. X4 ?# z, L, I$ mI want so much to see inside your heart
# K5 ?0 Z& a# f) MI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* Q9 G8 n  J9 iI’m still filled with fear
% F! {. w) Y0 oYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" X) f( s2 G( C. H( II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
2 b( L1 ~) \% H4 S9 bYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 |& H5 ]5 V4 Y5 P<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 }3 R, r: q/ f$ D. k<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 R! G, q: d& X$ M0 F<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 h: [8 {9 R6 W4 B<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 C- \" \/ X6 d. r: b$ z- u<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, u! J: w0 Z* ]/ y% B<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ G/ [6 `3 _+ {9 y% d<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( K1 S7 ~5 \0 l5 V  o<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 o1 A9 |) ]* I) u<P>你无需担心</P>
" K, n3 O, L: a9 w( \, z* x$ V<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 q7 I/ b; B% Y- b* s) \" w% O<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& _& C9 c! ^! Y  {3 O- h9 b<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) k7 h/ I( U8 s+ }, I6 x<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ l5 [4 v+ O  g8 a" t4 K: t0 M, ~<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 H8 _' A  f9 G: t4 \<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" K7 g/ r  |1 j, V<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ p# q# {8 g% f8 ]<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 H0 F) p* {9 E" a( n2 w: W<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 o: z6 [5 O8 S. O: [2 N; o; ^6 G<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( j) z1 x3 ^2 v! _% ?8 a6 @" K<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ f# n' l. v! g% l6 ~. g<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 M4 H9 O. k0 z) n  E2 F5 A<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 c' R( H3 c! f# y: f<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 s( o' j6 ~! r  K  B) e<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ u! U7 W0 t+ \) a4 ~4 y- e% J<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' K1 i0 s6 X" p. W9 n/ r<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 |) b9 F+ `' C  E" s<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 d$ a* O; ?% `<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( B9 a4 [0 X9 k( _; w<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: d& K1 W; G7 O<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& d$ m) `/ Q) W0 |( X<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; u( G( @1 p2 j# m1 @<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

: e9 p7 ]3 C. A- m+ f  W- c 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>