【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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  \2 b8 k# W' F* C6 x歌词我附在后面。
! a7 l1 C( ^" kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ A9 D8 f" Q, k2 t) `. F: T5 S; `When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ s, S# {  N# sThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
9 s! z8 I% k" DSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
8 F9 L9 Z* e9 J( E* z4 TI love you I love you with all my heart
7 D& y! |( x3 t5 L9 H0 bNothing can compare to my love
1 L) z7 M0 F# s- |Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 S: I  H) f- bThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 G6 _% ~, |$ e' RI want so much to see inside your heart
3 T/ Q/ m! P1 O9 ]# |7 |( r, QI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! g1 ?& m1 Y& G0 C, t$ Y- F7 dI’m still filled with fear
% i4 J! \' {3 Q3 VYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ h  k7 e8 h5 p$ M. C. cI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
- ~9 }" P& z5 [5 j! j6 b2 `Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 D& @5 Y9 Z' k3 h2 IIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 z! j' ?0 l1 t: O2 P5 @% E6 P/ g<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! ]/ v+ G) s- c<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 j: {. Z: n: J1 g5 [  k1 `! o+ g<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 a( ?' g) H/ I% C<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) k$ V3 Z9 o9 L) Y6 D1 g, Q4 z- b/ ?5 y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 ^# X$ ?0 Z9 E8 d<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 o8 s% P: n; L% G1 S: X<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 ?* c" ~6 k! R- j<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* ^! m  U* ?1 n- V<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. o! A2 R- p' ~  Y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 J0 i7 I9 n, B8 Q4 c8 l8 Z1 z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% h* Q+ \* D6 B5 {/ ~' o<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, s, ?. y  {8 b6 O, |<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% i; m$ H1 d1 K0 q0 K5 }<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 [' A! D: }# }9 J<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 y+ k3 V5 n4 ]' s% k+ F<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* P$ u8 L* I) \& D0 S& y; Q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ p3 f) y; I0 }! E<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! P. e2 Y, }0 k- J0 h' q" Q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# p2 B, `& n, w<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  [: ]* d6 I4 C) `; E. T<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! ?/ ~) y5 N' V# Z2 X7 D; {<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
, l% E1 {" E9 e% \<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. F- w! g/ P+ Q! b<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* x4 B/ z. U3 F0 K% b<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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, k9 K7 _2 m: U" I我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>