【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
2 ]$ d- |. C/ x# dThe moonlight is shining brightly,
6 x: M" ]& E1 ]; N6 |Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 P3 M) L7 b9 F) k$ q$ f! V( f, k! sWith the moon kissing it every night
( Y; b7 x; z" gSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) [+ ?" L  C# e2 [. bMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, H1 i) v/ f8 {; ]& `Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: T+ [( Y- f" \+ [I’m still filled with fear
$ Z  ?( R' k: q6 y9 P& vYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 j2 m$ ]0 V4 L& c1 O. nI regret not dying
- {# o% l: f' S* vI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  Q7 T! W1 P0 G/ Z* pWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; z% |: k" l; g3 [If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 ^9 s0 Z! a4 U" \4 NRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

) C( `/ _, V1 v( l  z) C4 S<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  y6 @$ x  G' v; B<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& _, Q# ?3 M8 e; J% B<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  C$ G& h7 x. X0 s5 e4 g" I( Y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* h, I$ F6 D& k% t8 n& W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- m$ D1 |+ f- E<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ G% E1 C. K! Q9 H# x<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 Q6 |: i6 `9 h$ j1 D" p! ~9 W<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 v2 j; m: h7 ?& R% U: w' _3 k<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& L  c7 W5 v' S: \6 v* v<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* |/ ^( ?7 }+ I+ c4 L$ O. q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) w6 ?5 ?- o" w- _/ `, H, k1 t<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) D) \9 @1 C8 e, l, U2 o8 @<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ u8 Q8 W5 U- G<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 j  a9 ^! t6 Z( n( F* E. s0 n- u<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 j9 W: Z. S- s  P<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: O9 O2 F3 ^; {5 h9 z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' S" o, x) j0 F& @+ K; i<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 h% P. P2 C  s1 W, n<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ a6 n. e5 c4 [' N8 O4 `<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: U1 w( b0 U0 s: N<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 m" J# H$ y9 U& @1 l2 k<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, N: t7 ], Y2 B" e- J( e* W# a<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; g( P% N' D2 s  u: }<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( \* v- K5 K/ A4 P<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: l) D9 ?: T" l7 h$ A  c- {<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 T( I( q; F. h8 o3 h  q4 }+ ~<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# L- D. H  j2 O8 J- M9 |<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 b9 i7 ?9 ^: I! T; i* r<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 ]8 q) a; F; c8 n<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" o' `: D) B6 p4 B, Y! f<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>