【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
& i& m2 x) Q5 R  E' L6 hThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! C- D4 O. O0 t# Q' _1 R8 L) FWith the moon kissing it every night
5 T: [3 G- ^# ~/ jSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
0 r' f% m/ D! g, W; x+ AI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
: a7 l: h, S* O+ G5 KYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 C7 f, t; V: z" V* [# o4 w" II regret not dying
; J4 V; U8 Q' z- s8 m- q1 fI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, b9 `/ x/ A; F6 @" a: zWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 q; B6 T( Z1 z. Y) t* iIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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  {& z; T6 R! v+ F<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 T* n( J) V, o<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% ^3 }# u" u1 K. i<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 T6 K" I. T: E. Y6 D" O3 c<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, J! V/ c" m6 Y4 I5 G# |<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. c3 ^$ C9 O0 K. }8 j6 K<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ z/ n" k6 g$ T- Y3 I<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, Z, W6 h5 _% h+ ~1 H! u0 N0 D) y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 }7 p0 R7 p/ ?) L0 J3 M. }  E<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# a6 `! B& O( e% N<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ m. A# C9 ?/ K; r<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# n1 |8 Y0 u( w; a0 ]7 \<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# ]' u/ b' R9 b2 v# R- l" U<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 j3 J+ E0 G' _9 x0 A/ [' L<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
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  J, T7 T+ K) D<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* C; X: @6 B' ?" L4 l<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" ^, k$ l; s) {* @( }8 V  h<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" _' a$ a6 k/ F0 @<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' Z+ ~# Y. x" D) O<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) E5 D( Y/ q5 h3 w<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 V5 `9 i- H. R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ B# w% D/ ~4 G4 m<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 z% d; h4 E4 K; O/ j<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>