【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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8 A. R0 W" M! [! b, k歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
; q; i8 q" f" a! G  @Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ a& c) F1 D7 w0 {& i. LWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 c) J* L) ~, i: K3 U2 {The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 j5 I( W9 K5 q% i  e1 k6 _5 M0 W- sSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& w6 N4 T- G8 H/ p% l- VMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 ^4 {5 y+ [$ G, ^Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* ^! s/ l$ K1 s* a9 i$ }I love you I love you with all my heart
8 ?7 n4 q( g  T( ^2 XNothing can compare to my love
8 J+ O( @1 A( \$ {' I9 ~Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 D9 L, Z* h/ o" h% y7 OI’m still filled with fear
& ~; [8 ^! h& c" l) v: Z1 |Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) @9 n- b* L2 p- g( Y6 \4 Q  oI regret not dying
  _6 `3 y1 u2 K: [I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ X5 f" f6 t1 j; C% _. X0 [( jWith such a tongue as yours,
6 s  T+ Q% e# p9 D9 \. A: \' bYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* H# z+ t1 }' N<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. i. e7 S% O1 ]<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* ~4 Z5 |: n1 \<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% m( \, k6 G3 U4 z2 N1 k. o<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 l5 f" R9 a& k3 K( u" v4 k<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 G1 p2 A! ~% L) k* Q& e: Z  a<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: a8 g- I* O1 d/ k6 g% [<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 F0 i; a$ N9 \% Y5 G<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 I: Q; U5 w0 \7 N) l1 V) l<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' s. M  _4 `! K<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ n3 C- w5 `# |. p1 F6 h9 g<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" L+ E: H# l* g& I8 d- v<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 E1 Y8 o: d. L8 c8 M$ n! \4 H- Y4 ^0 C<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 Z) X+ I3 ^+ Q3 R" @% y) _<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# O  F+ p9 }. G- ^% k! v- Z7 e<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( h5 [4 k' K) m/ ^) ^<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  m: U: q8 u" V( B/ C: f4 R- p<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 [& Z& P( b, v" W4 t<P>I regret not dying</P>
. k9 D' f0 L: o8 X7 H- \' }6 W<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( D: |8 j6 e8 o. d6 g- q% l7 p<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 y$ I# ]7 A$ [& e<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 y) [2 `& I6 e  j<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ \$ ^$ u) P, H* O+ l6 s& U: ?! `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# s. n) O4 q% o" j6 ~' l( u<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  b# \  L/ a2 X<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! D1 n4 ~; K# \# k  P<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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2 ^* {+ ^+ Z+ I/ w0 T+ T 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>