【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
# b9 \5 u# P3 U; nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
8 Q' T; @/ f  t7 e9 ^# EMaking the sky glitter like gold,
! e) t9 E; c2 B. T& [- HWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) q  m' V1 Y5 q2 Z2 dThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
1 \; _$ v+ c" s* A* {& GCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# j5 P6 M$ k' X) dI want so much to see inside your heart
) M; Y3 k6 U+ {' B. [" q6 z' ZI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) Q/ `' _( d' t: gI’m still filled with fear
, y  T4 k) o" ]/ l3 kYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) G- s! z5 T0 w( a) ]Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' h: V2 V2 N8 U" b; D, s1 z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 A9 V+ M5 k0 k8 ?' t% }<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 t; }+ s6 ]" E9 k' s0 ~<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% |* |/ o! G4 K9 B; D<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; k% N) }7 E! e" F<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 L8 B: N* u( J2 Q' t0 z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: a* A' Q& i7 _4 L<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' |! s- I/ ?6 k<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, J  q6 j  v1 a+ s<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) [; `* x5 X6 H- D$ h4 ?* t<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; W& m9 C5 H! X! n9 q' B5 S: E<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' E8 B! ?. g1 q( s" P2 A<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* N$ |7 x4 B% `0 e1 w# C6 }<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' e% ^& J. K4 D/ {4 Z. ^<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# u1 ]( {2 ~% {<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! i* ^1 l: E8 q0 D" P  z% b$ y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 z8 r- j# J& r  @! v<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* q. k. G2 C' m" }$ n$ s, m<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" H0 R' g! U# L0 N0 }: H9 N<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 @5 B0 O9 W/ ^* c3 f/ ]<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 A  z- j; w  }9 @. E<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% ?: j3 V, A# q- ~7 C; B2 X<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" Z0 Y9 R) e5 T" f# m3 e4 d/ _* }# o<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 m7 x! I" ~5 b! S# w0 v<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. j% y( u" I+ I8 F<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 L; l8 ^! R9 P1 p5 {% Z  x5 _<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

; G# z6 l: h2 R) e. F2 U 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>