【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
# \( w  [0 @0 p1 f8 Q+ D" }, w$ YThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 A7 k1 I/ W8 `7 NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# h  Q. d9 ~9 r2 D0 OThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
! }! C' a8 f& t& kIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 D, z6 `8 [% e5 G& [- R0 W6 i3 tYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 ^/ b2 V7 H1 Z5 V, ?: qEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
! w" }9 o' G% J2 ]Nothing can compare to my love
$ l; K0 q- T' v( z; XCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 C( B4 [* }# c! xThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 s, _8 M# o% ]$ ]  T$ B8 v- ~) s) vI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 X+ \: n' b8 x* o5 {With such a tongue as yours,
4 `7 t- M' Y$ |/ z) R$ M, AYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 ^, E* |% L  m  e% z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* q& O3 g& t) T3 _' {: v<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ q1 d$ A, }; U7 N. Z  Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# g0 U  O( I" w  }<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 j- r) f& n9 }& A7 R2 c- a$ d1 f8 h<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 s: i1 d/ O2 E; t8 x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& S. V2 D. w% N1 f# o<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' N! @. _, j" y7 z$ f! Q* s5 y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& p  [" d' y3 F: I<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ J( N! w1 ]% z% S<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ B4 ?+ H# D/ H4 ^$ o9 _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 h$ R& ]; c# U% s0 y- s<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* d* _3 p6 q3 [. G<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! P$ O& b5 F* ?/ o+ \/ r<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ E! N) }+ Z1 c! ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) B4 H- R* B  W' s. }$ \<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. u6 G! f/ C: j) S5 X/ Q! E<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; G) r+ d/ a) `. \& s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 r# R1 f1 q) T<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- t$ U& Q( j% E7 c; d: j<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( M' }( t/ F' j( ?5 @<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* ?9 |+ [) @- U0 a$ j5 g( B<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# o# e5 `0 c% `$ f! o<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: E+ F; X" h+ `( y<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 F% M7 f3 f* ^. y1 k<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: P$ j$ S, h. R2 d# z( M<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>