【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 o. W( @" Z+ o% Y/ A歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ V8 y: Q+ K5 h& A1 `1 a* ]1 m1 qThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 `' N% A. m# C- m3 M7 |. C; f8 M/ x1 FWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) W) ?/ g5 y! R6 T' y( XIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
! ]7 j$ F2 ]$ W$ N% cI love you I love you with all my heart
5 L! u: H, U* A# B  x6 T. a, f5 p/ aNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% c6 K6 Y' [6 h2 CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
  [' E4 c1 A; YI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* j+ h; A# a' ?) i& H2 M$ F! z! DWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# q# w2 q' h1 x/ v9 x<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 t( ^3 Q6 {' l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, J; [2 v( {) |4 i<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 M' |( Y+ U6 [<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- S/ g* Z8 G. H0 ~+ P<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  _; k5 Z. z4 x. X+ g; h5 t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! ^$ V  O+ c# j/ k% H3 u+ y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, }: |* O1 X3 a: j  _3 Y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 R! o* @& F  p<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' ~8 u4 X6 C& q" K. {4 ]4 `0 H<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
3 x3 p: z+ Z) N5 W% K; J3 b" r<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, C& I+ d6 C! o, X$ F<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 \# \- W9 T( Y+ d) x; {& q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( y$ B% M6 \! y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! G- C' I: d% s4 ?! y6 t- z  b<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# O" s  @3 h" O+ L$ M<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ G; o- S. P' T. V<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 A+ ~5 L: y' \! D) m<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 ?0 i& S. d2 w; l0 m( Y* U3 m) [0 q+ a<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  ^" q- Y# Z; d7 I<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& Z+ |2 E! ]/ e& l, `% U0 ]<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- V- R1 w5 o. r: d# q$ N8 t<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) f$ A: c5 C; B1 W  S$ J' h. E( W5 B<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: s$ o# h* q4 w9 q5 ~" T9 K. w; k& }<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ V+ C7 g( U1 x" [<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' f+ j/ j- Q" |/ s2 c<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 ~% A9 p$ ]0 O0 f( I<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. x$ u8 [1 D2 P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* y2 K! ~; y9 p% J9 a! h7 ?# q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: v3 J4 t, s7 a: d) ]2 k<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 J6 B2 d% s% [- B! f7 A" g<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, S9 f& a( {- b7 O; ~<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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7 z# O$ s7 h! q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 G3 _+ P/ T8 U1 w( w1 A4 L<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>