【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% o! z+ V$ T& ^When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 U6 d0 J1 ]. `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
* A, S, U" A! KSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 d) x3 F6 f8 M  R0 m3 ?) V3 S4 qYou needn’t fear anything
4 N# K1 g, ~2 {- C* b  E7 xMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
% [/ f; O, o; F& l$ i; \3 T2 GNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" O" x) f2 F9 P; d' z$ yThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 o& J. q% Q+ wI want so much to see inside your heart
, c8 B* T/ {" T& X2 F6 B- BI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 B1 F5 z- M9 x1 FI’m still filled with fear
& b% l- w' q" c4 ^4 b! H3 ~Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. V! R1 r0 D! {I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  J; I2 @( r6 nWith such a tongue as yours,
) J0 O3 N" F8 i: h& h2 hYour speech can’t even keep up with it
$ a3 R" O% j* KIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 j5 f5 n$ M; y. P) K<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 f/ f; N6 `1 D- x! Q+ s" S5 H: \5 F<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 N( c! `* S! y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 Q' W0 N& K' y  J- G. I<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( Q4 J9 ~! s  K: i/ O3 Y5 g8 l<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 {( J7 }& c5 {! F<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) O' A0 |$ x) X! R- c<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ \( Q6 g$ m9 Z<P>你无需担心</P>
: t' f4 Y, h/ K+ C<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 {* x5 m+ p) D5 M: N<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: ^2 f! e* f; j, [* V<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ _- M7 q) ~2 @/ u: }8 u<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" ~$ d( j& G* H9 D5 s$ X0 T0 f<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 A6 d1 ~( B7 `2 @! i2 U<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 u) O# d3 V: o6 |$ i7 j# u$ K<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; q9 c6 a+ q) m/ Q5 J3 b<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 J) s( u2 |+ e+ d5 G3 z% [<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 _$ f8 M) w. }! S1 u' B6 {- D<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: K% j; w2 ^7 c<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# z7 \. W# ^8 Y% x- s<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 P9 F" s( X+ ~2 d' P<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 b; m& E% a/ t/ x5 @<P>I regret not dying</P>
; |( c  ^0 [' p3 Z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. _  G1 p3 r. r% }+ p0 Y6 I/ S- O<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: A3 k8 \0 g" d1 e; z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# n! h- @+ R( x6 u1 r<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 w; o. \3 E  z: g+ q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( d" ~; V& x; O5 `) r7 x<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ T' d1 _3 b% v' r1 I<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

( H# k! X( R6 U" c& K# _ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>