【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
( O$ J( W3 z* HMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 I' d9 [# F* X2 B, yThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) u! Y% D9 i! l$ oThe sky is happy down to its soul
6 G( u: e3 t) \$ aWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ J; O0 b/ T" o9 \$ l! s, V! j9 hIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ B8 l0 f: o, C- uYou needn’t fear anything
1 G* d5 r8 o/ ?. G5 Y# _/ z7 Y& JMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# E7 D! T$ K0 s! e3 w, rI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
' b& P- C1 k$ {" u# }2 t& ?, oCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. _1 a- z& L/ J7 B# c1 ]The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. Q* A7 K& @3 n/ A0 g* x; Z) wI want so much to see inside your heart
! t( y% Z+ n  r0 \4 {; M1 oI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, m6 ], c0 ]  P( ~& U3 c# ~I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# _' M6 ?; ~- k2 yI regret not dying
& V4 ^  }. D" qI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% y2 F/ V! S5 ?2 u6 S, ]5 }Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; R0 a0 K: k) e2 G# y, M( f<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% a' y: |/ l" ]7 _) x0 E<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& y8 W& B! F' b5 h<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" M+ A7 C$ F: p+ p5 n<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% Q& p) f* q2 F8 l6 ~( z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 E. F8 B7 f0 y" U<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 S, P& c6 n  X" g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# `/ u; J6 u( d) J& j3 [<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ v3 P. L% z# m% R, S2 A# A<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  H/ G% b# q' I7 v0 t; k1 I<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- `8 i# O2 P5 j& V- \4 R<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ v; e6 ], b. U* ]9 n7 i<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( B8 U6 A5 j, O) Z+ s; X<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 \6 T+ ^' o3 [; p, \8 t. U. N<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. o* n* p2 ?- H; C<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# V6 _7 K7 Z, ~2 L  ~<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ x' D  p) u5 U<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; u! h* z' X8 Z3 X; K, }<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# I/ d; {4 `) M3 o<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" M% k% T. t2 r/ T" P* O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 a$ X# E7 M. s4 N0 z) I) z, e<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 d# ^+ c, `2 b* Q! ^<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' `; |" z/ h5 |; t" s<P>I regret not dying</P>
( w4 Y' [2 d& g5 q0 b<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* a0 i" r/ q% |5 j4 n<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 g5 m/ n' F6 k4 I<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( z- f& k& m$ u<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 m( J5 @; T; R. ]<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 S; w, o; N  @  {7 K. n+ {<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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  v0 J+ x3 k! \我请你剖开它

' {" t: f- y" j" D& E. O+ F 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 v2 o/ C1 I7 G) x) O<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>