【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 r! X) l( T: Y3 `8 GMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 f, U$ t( Q- h' C2 TWith the moon kissing it every night
; q6 S8 C" N* NSeeing the sky content with its love
2 s% N/ O9 _- q; d# Q' `It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
3 ^# k" `9 j0 Y3 YMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
; ?/ d' b: N# M7 c2 J$ ]8 SI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
! o4 ]# R: z# DCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 Z/ p3 i5 _& Q, OThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. h  ?9 v8 H9 a0 a" x* @9 TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
8 T; N: x) F  ~) J$ H( `I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ c+ k, s7 D3 J( A6 DWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& u6 U% x. m# U; S# X" C6 C* j2 N<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 E2 @0 V# Y8 P<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 }% [% T& @( l% I. P/ ?' S  [<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 v# B$ {8 N4 B; D% v/ T<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 T' E0 q. Q" {9 |3 h<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 ?$ e3 C% {, b: f+ U<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 z; v6 w& k0 \5 g8 X0 t<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" J: h2 _  G5 }! z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 l* {- y, X8 I* x5 p% C<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& ^& d3 e1 c% D. I% _$ M8 j+ |+ J<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 O" X! i" E* O' _<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ I$ v) j( Y7 |2 R0 q" |<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, s1 B4 X( N& B2 H7 C<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& B3 i) q' I, S" c: C3 O& O/ y( @<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" ]& M, |$ ], G: ^) U<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 k- C5 `/ C  X' t<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. u; p& Z, s1 V+ t3 _<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 Z3 H/ @5 w$ d% u, D& Q+ C<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" t3 L3 ]( I% f" S<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ e8 g; ~3 f% D/ j, U' d<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( b) ~8 w9 r1 d  S6 {5 \<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>