【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ g% M' `3 z6 R# _Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, P* C" V5 o  @4 X7 WThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 W) J! w; W* Z6 CThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 q( D' p8 ]% q/ m" M( m, m0 P. rSeeing the sky content with its love
1 F3 s. l. Z- o3 X% e8 P$ kIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 E4 S) B' ]+ r( r; v9 F& EMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, A# x/ U- v% M6 f2 f: w2 ]Every other word you utter is love
: A: c$ y7 \6 u. E: d" e$ c0 BI really want to know just how much you love me
6 e8 \6 [, F& f' O" II love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
' P, ]+ L( a& R' A, U+ i6 t2 U5 VI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) |% G6 t/ i5 s# LI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" d% U# X& ^2 T" Z6 ZI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 Z/ j$ d5 N1 ~" g- I  ^With such a tongue as yours,
) x9 M8 {3 n4 X1 tYour speech can’t even keep up with it
) C5 N5 n# J, {& cIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

* G2 x6 i- \2 A* \<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ y6 X8 g2 q$ X( {8 b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; x9 _3 l6 a% O+ ^( h4 W<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# |- j! ?* W3 H" M/ U3 [<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 }( e4 D2 _( V& `9 y, X; z; {<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' ]2 W. j  m' T, m1 n<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ \8 g( ?4 h. ^# p7 u5 c$ K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 d, D, J+ @8 g5 T5 G2 B6 Y4 u<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 S* G3 }' r  r: ~<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 p5 U$ T$ R4 p+ x1 N5 z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ r1 K" {; V; m9 p% k: s<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& Q; Q& W* Q) `/ Z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 T  `7 @4 A; G<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 ?4 S2 _: J5 O9 |1 T" Z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  a5 }" v& U6 f2 ?( @<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 t$ e( u" s$ |<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 j5 _/ ^! s, d' Y9 v+ X<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 H  Q; q1 e8 D3 M) {7 B$ p<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* g; B3 M* e* O6 L! H0 P* ]3 ~' g<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# x" _4 c3 W0 |( p+ {* Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& p" |2 ]  t& X6 U- [* [) `<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 W- Z% y, u+ `* g<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: }8 I4 Q8 r2 u( ~  x4 I<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* a7 [8 Z# s. V4 ^' e; L  ?$ `. t<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; O/ i) C. T; M$ i& \- m2 O<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 I# ?* {5 d- d& f- e<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 k/ }2 N9 S+ Y/ Y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 k" W8 x* V- N' k4 V+ e<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 m; W1 S: o; l  R0 b8 J<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) i+ y+ Q6 a7 {/ Q% d, }  s<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' K+ w' H' \- N; S<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ U  x$ n; X) }6 p3 G: I<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

, U: n* h' a* R' O4 ` 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>