【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
( T& c: M) j8 Z$ D+ MThe moonlight is shining brightly,
) S* B. E) }+ b% YMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* z9 `* w  A6 sThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 g+ u7 v/ u8 A2 E' N  K- K7 Q4 DWith the moon kissing it every night
2 M" D: `5 P. @: ^+ Z/ t6 NSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 {0 Z' r/ B9 K4 ?0 G' K, Y7 ]You needn’t fear anything
  n1 \3 [4 M$ q  T- ~My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ p# J9 \! U+ [" ]Every other word you utter is love
: \& u. g9 V8 r+ WI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
" `: ^8 O' L7 ^, {$ I! X+ k% @# sYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' j  Z2 s  e& a0 P# ?! F- |I regret not dying
  o% Q9 b, s9 W# _* a- g7 ZI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( r2 B. d' N; o6 `With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: ~# [: [: D' F8 A/ ~5 q2 HIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# C/ L( y2 c2 i& sRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; Y! K$ U& @5 V<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' L, z' q' Z/ c7 P& x) ?6 y4 ~, T<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! I% U! u) C' N<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% K3 `- N) Q* K$ f4 S! B; u$ {<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# l% V9 B1 t7 a- K- R<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: d% f9 |! i% ], f: Y4 |1 h<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 `$ _) D1 S9 Z" D<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 t5 z' L: T' P<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* U$ c( l% t+ `<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ M! v0 o+ T* A+ i  X& B6 X<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! G! p! n0 d2 G3 g, ~; i<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ }( d" M( B0 r7 b9 `+ V7 h" e6 h<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, O% @  e; z) r& m' W<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 H9 m3 t6 H, \# \<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ K8 q8 w& I& P) a$ [, k* i<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 E. l+ J7 Q6 O% H" F1 \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- b5 {7 i+ t  u) i/ o<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 U4 P6 L6 C# Z* _+ j* ?+ [<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 M+ ^3 c3 k4 }* R2 b2 s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% g, ~( V9 y9 w<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
. ^$ B: `' f% L# J! L4 a<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 K' R9 p& \/ [" t2 c' r<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% {1 q+ ^# {- j$ L5 T: V7 |3 d<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 L3 M7 ?* L' W<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! j) [; r2 T" X0 O' E2 j<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 g4 D& A3 o- e% Y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ B/ X& c, L% V1 L* p<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. R' t% j. G* w7 o) [<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>