【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 x# t5 T: Y3 K8 MThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* G$ r" T; W) B4 aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ _! V8 O: V3 c) pThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
: O4 H8 ~- I6 |Seeing the sky content with its love
+ E8 I7 @* d5 E, t: D4 MIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ G9 N7 M8 F! x, A7 u3 v) OMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* |+ c$ E/ e6 K; D6 iEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
; x! g& B2 F. x1 d4 Z% S4 uNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 t  W% {/ o4 M; `& cI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( ~+ }- ^  O4 T6 Q( A1 M6 r& O( n! pI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; {. ?4 G; g& zI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
8 @8 G6 s" e2 C7 j+ rYour speech can’t even keep up with it
' ]+ t; Y: \, S4 y9 G" ^% {( yIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' O4 b3 g1 U! c! }  ?2 v$ YRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 k: W) G) ^; n  b4 I. J0 ]2 [<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 j/ \; V8 O7 S, V  ]4 o& f' Y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. K3 D; v; \6 a1 c<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 E& I7 w. E5 O+ s! `+ O<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 K0 A; G& r$ E( m! |$ p6 p6 V<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 P# A( a6 K) q  s/ Q' v5 ?<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* a  s- _$ q. h<P>你无需担心</P>
2 w- T4 y  {/ v1 h% T<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 q: w( O' f, Q( \0 u' C$ u<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: {* K/ R8 Q; A! E2 q) v- X% n<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ V" O1 D, i% k% ~- x) f& x  E5 v- l. ^<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' E& t" S$ J/ U3 r+ C8 x<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* a# o$ }1 E( D$ z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: X6 j2 J! Y- r( W; N<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# n4 W( L. @# |% V1 {$ L8 Y& ~5 M<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' c6 T; p/ ^/ Q8 M<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 ^8 p- ^7 Y9 S! i+ h<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; A5 B+ F& Q" O  y8 v( U2 g. g$ |' X# f<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 b3 k4 c9 m/ x* n6 Y+ I& K<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  T8 r# z) w  X$ L# V<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  [4 R  n1 r; A<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 M7 U+ d, ], D) H! t* M6 t<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; r0 j  |1 }- O  i/ ~<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 O$ L- U/ E& t, ~7 y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 R, r) _' H; A: t7 H7 z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 i* S! p# U6 {  _9 H3 p<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 r- [+ W1 v. r! X$ }<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
- Z9 G5 M# B" O7 `; a3 V/ ?<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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+ C( Q1 @4 |* g" d# l' }6 M  t我请你剖开它

/ \: D: K! r! e& ^- j) i; v. h 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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