【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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5 Z( s3 c% }3 z4 e4 Y1 \歌词我附在后面。
( H3 _5 d) O8 [The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ L+ |7 h5 c/ `+ T4 u6 d  yWith the moon kissing it every night
- b2 l" q& d9 ]; |0 V9 Q, t0 QSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  W! U1 |/ M' q  t4 h" R$ _9 \( VYou needn’t fear anything
. o! A" J+ {9 u5 X( V# ^; vMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* `, Q6 m$ V) L# vThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
  L4 v6 `, J) T( L; R9 c! bYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& K- R$ w9 ~) m7 J4 i" H* ^' }. mI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  h9 J% z* P& L4 e) GWith such a tongue as yours,
$ h/ Q  z) r0 DYour speech can’t even keep up with it
4 W# T8 H0 K9 H" O: u7 JIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, U' y; F! w: W4 _4 h2 @  H1 LRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& u  q; }" k# k" ]. @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( Q( ~! j+ T0 J, _2 S! G<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 ]$ e& r# O/ S5 V' {- |4 C<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 p9 K9 s, I% s+ Z  J: Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 a1 g/ ^& o) C2 ]" L<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! T' I6 c3 A% x& L<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  z: V, ~) b/ I0 V2 P<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. m5 I" K& V& M. y) {8 |+ u<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 n/ k4 @! S3 n) b7 K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" a! N' O8 J$ S4 `- _  T. y# v! E$ K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 I2 N5 }9 B7 k* Q/ L! [7 ~<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 s# E0 z9 w1 `; Y/ [% b* ?<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 w) @* y1 o3 J0 v- M1 X$ w' i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 R1 ^& a: z, X: c; t7 W<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' j7 e9 A& j4 O9 ~5 e' K; j<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* V' U2 r0 n$ m# h1 e9 s8 F1 @<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) @$ ~% r3 }) {& q' f<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' v$ L2 G9 @0 n2 S3 W# \* _/ d% C<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& H! Z! q7 {& ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 y) b3 N+ @, d" q: ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! @8 k) B7 W- K% ~7 e6 [) T<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 x0 B: Q+ S- L9 @; U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 I& J3 d4 }' M$ T, f, J<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# z% k  E& Y4 ^9 n$ J  T: S" x' d<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 ], y  M  _- y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 S! |2 @  ?/ t<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! H5 G' @3 G& j9 z7 z6 ?<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' n! A$ R7 x5 X/ {3 x<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 e( E4 W& l  A/ w; w( u! f- h<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' Y5 d9 c9 R3 W7 j, q4 Z- Q, l<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 g( i  ^. N% M. j$ }5 ^- G9 L7 b<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 a! o& C5 g) p1 V3 w) w<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>