【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
+ k7 Y: S3 s& g/ uThe moonlight is shining brightly,
) o1 D  S( W5 C' G) |6 m# }  B# X6 fMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 L# |! ~) p$ d7 S- m3 {1 ^# KThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. s; [7 x8 n6 N8 `" X% v6 h& \The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
8 p; g! n( a3 S. KIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
# S# Y! @7 y* n4 k1 f2 Y( A0 T+ LI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ h! Q$ G' w+ b& M# B; u5 ]Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ \+ l7 o" W' N4 E9 JI want so much to see inside your heart
. n. ~% w7 [9 u) h; BI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
  \+ R% ~4 v1 s$ s2 G$ n1 `+ _Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
* L* \/ z, i7 {$ D: T3 S1 t6 ]I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 D* \/ ]% N. b5 F6 [With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* r" r+ K/ z* |0 E, Z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 Z- k  ^0 s; D$ Q% ]<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; }& d: [- @+ e<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ M" j9 _! j' G* w+ a<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: W  x  o: E$ K/ K0 B& x<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# b- h0 L! Q& u. V) i$ U  [- Q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 g& ^! N' Z' a1 s  T<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! v7 [) T& V, }2 D* n<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. `9 `9 m* }7 s3 e! Y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ Y) j0 h8 X9 Z; |& N, e" j4 \6 i<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& _( h3 z  j4 p$ f5 q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" H: x2 t9 t+ T2 E) |; R<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% i/ Q7 n5 B4 i<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 y# `  R! k( i  R; n/ W<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 s$ V, o, s1 D0 r" Y  X9 r3 {<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! l. x. o3 P7 i; `( h( l<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' s4 d0 G3 C- F<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ c' t  J' c; D: B1 W+ ?<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" k: L: U6 T1 a  |<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# E& @, G9 z1 k' G6 V( ?<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: s, B3 H( J* ]3 `9 m5 R<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 V/ h% i. m1 a7 m3 u2 k1 P<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 n) d6 [. B0 e/ q! N2 N- J, A<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% h# b( `. Z! R' h, _! b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 E1 S. n1 ], ^<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* U* I/ ^5 ]: I<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) c9 i/ Y$ [4 R  O<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( T+ t- j3 ?. W) Q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" ^' U9 Z+ c7 j( ?<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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3 F! c+ J, s: R7 a0 r0 O我请你剖开它
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5 n5 ^, P0 L) o3 V, _$ K3 d 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>