【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
2 b' Z5 {9 ^  w5 m! f/ i4 k: Q袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿
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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
0 J5 b8 ]9 w1 g  I( X3 qThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
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我想我從未表露出
, V, W  a% `* ]深藏在我心底的那句
  f3 X) d! C- l/ J. z) h我愛你  

& u% ]1 }, }/ h$ c0 C. ^From the first moment we met,
& E0 J: P0 M) z; q  P8 q& XI already loved you with all my heart

; L/ p+ L; I/ u5 f  |/ Y在遇見你的第一刻
你已經深深的佔領了
我的心

7 D/ p. ^$ ^6 I' J7 m. t. yWe meet and talk everyday,
# A+ B/ c5 N5 `" UBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
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/ [! Z) U5 M7 j+ ?縱然朝夕相處
還是不能肯定你的心意
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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
9 J4 \0 @  f. Q, n, U) ?1 N6 z凝視著你的眼
搜尋著你的魂
我也許就能了解
你的心情

Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?

愛  簡單的一句愛
8 P: a: `, Y2 z+ k: M1 J' S) a為什麼
2 Q$ Z2 ?- X) `/ l( r$ K如此難以表白?
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I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
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: |. G. W, m& ^; N. l: A愛你 想要告訴你
卻總是說不出來
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One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 X6 l0 w2 w4 R2 r8 J也許有一天
- ?; R) z* p% X0 y, s+ w你將從我指間滑漏

1 r1 q, K0 J8 _6 g+ O! E7 A7 hIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

希望今天還不會太晚
  @' a" K' }, C0 W7 a1 K( |1 M- ^讓我向你表白
6 R3 _8 L5 T) d我心底的秘密

I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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4 Q" Q3 v0 A9 t; P& H( S5 y不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

Can I entrust it to you?
4 O6 H! U9 d) R7 [  f7 T4 rEntrust my love within your heart
+ L  C1 z+ {9 C0 ]3 b, O4 o2 I可否讓我托付給你?
" {5 @" g; v; ^# Q8 K9 d1 F7 S托付我的愛
! j* r) }( z5 x0 @) c! L& B1 G& v收在你心裡

Love… just the word love
4 @+ C8 B$ Z3 A; z+ sWhy is it so difficult to express?
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愛  簡單一句愛
為什麼如此難以表白?
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9 q5 f( `: K8 I) }- o* @: |I want to confess that I love you,
8 H  I" k& f  ~1 p' B+ q" MBut I never did

$ S, f3 d1 }4 b: N& a愛你 我想要告訴你
卻還是說不出來
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! K# K& k1 i! _0 HOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers

也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏

If today isn’t too late,
4 l2 X. }! ?5 k- s: mI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

; {7 x8 L" ^; N0 V4 v希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
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I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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# b; k+ K  H2 }不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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8 Y* S3 x  A3 z. g8 @Can I entrust it to you?
9 f1 R- O% \: J' @# T' L* u. R$ K. `4 qEntrust my love within your heart
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% c* f7 Y; o/ B6 g5 o' _- t! Y+ _可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
收在你心裡
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; b/ K. R5 L& Q% g4 a+ VCan I entrust it to you?
6 b8 W8 n; E& t5 x& s$ ZEntrust my love within your heart
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可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛 收在你心裡
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2 u1 D) w6 F4 g; [$ Y5 u- uThe moonlight is shining brightly,
8 M( E& V& Y" r: s' k9 GMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness

皎潔月光下
- e. }8 b" P3 }) d" T- y天空金銀閃爍
凝視著星空
我心充滿快樂
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+ v( c9 O5 c3 \& h' l+ P8 mThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
( G6 e# u; D/ M( j5 b- @Seeing the sky content with its love
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+ W# @( b0 Q  R: j月光映在我的眼底
月夜陪著我一起沉醉
) m+ ~5 I% ]3 X$ n/ [月光輕吻著夜幕
星空充滿著歡樂
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It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour
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我心卻充斥著憂鬱
4 L: j* u1 G+ [7 ~0 w3 Q+ W害怕我們的愛
7 x0 o1 G( E+ w. v" e" \, C7 d終將逝去

You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily

你勿須擔心憂鬱
我心充滿著歡欣
愛你
5 B, H9 D  i* J( l' Q堅定不渝

Every other word you utter is love
* Q. Y5 J/ `( B' d* i7 GI really want to know just how much you love me
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你的一言一語都是愛
我真的想知道你到底愛我多少
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I love you I love you with all my heart
0 _1 a& H8 ?: D- V' HNothing can compare to my love

我的愛 全心全意
7 q6 C6 i8 B( s2 ^+ S3 Q9 V: p你要知道 我的愛無與倫比

Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
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能覆蓋半個天空嗎?

The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整個天空 也不及我一半的愛
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I want so much to see inside your heart

; ~% E! \  v! T6 O1 S" Y+ m我想看透你的心

I invite you to rip it out
( u  G/ Q  A5 UTo prove my love, I’m willing to die

) a2 b5 R$ n( d9 E我歡迎你將它打開
, S4 u& e% g! m8 A% d! g' D我願意用生命
+ `3 L4 g/ D/ c3 N) g來證明我的愛

9 ~- F% d5 x. CI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues

我依然滿心憂鬱
你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語
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" |. n7 }, l! D2 O  u' `& fI regret not dying
! ~- ?" R! T: n7 \7 u0 MI only have one tongue
' Q/ A4 H- ~9 U( a9 FIt’s nothing close to 100,000

0 U9 \6 D4 v/ E# W( j/ @3 T; q可惜我未能以死證明
我只有一張口
遠遠不及千萬

With such a tongue as yours,
& H7 h6 ~' t/ @: K5 u9 g. cYour speech can’t even keep up with it

這樣一張巧舌
你的言語都跟不上

If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ q. R) P# R) U6 D' ~$ n如果我真有千百張口
我將對你訴說
千萬個心思

Rambling on about a thousand words of love

+ w0 b6 b6 k6 {6 |; q訴說千萬個
愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

6 I; S$ l7 ?5 ?( c是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒