【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
7 g  z" m5 R4 S  C1 Mxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
8 ~$ |+ H# q9 M2 e* bvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

( n) K9 I9 F' s# q( v$ I: g再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱
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) d+ ?, J" B$ c6 aThe moonlight is shining brightly,
皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
1 W( o( L# R/ t5 ^, mMaking the sky glitter like gold,
8 j5 T  Z6 J# _: l2 ?2 ^夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂
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& W; [; P6 D9 F$ F+ k1 z* aWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 l* _6 |+ e* [7 B# G6 `8 X凝视明月 我心欢畅
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
月光闪烁 在我眼中
- L! A4 V% w$ h5 BThe sky is happy down to its soul
( g. P! r. C8 Y1 y( V  v一片丹心 照耀夜空

With the moon kissing it every night
: e: b8 u7 W( @7 Y0 L9 k9 c看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
6 D. [- U: [( h+ C% L0 kSeeing the sky content with its love
夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
$ |& ~  I9 i- h, V; S5 i* ?It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
' ~+ V+ h" o& D5 Z# f& \3 h我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
You needn’t fear anything
$ \, Z+ K% m$ b4 I! }怕这怕那 又是何苦
1 ]! U5 ~! k9 L# S# Q+ z5 F7 AMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% h  S. D  u9 G7 E8 [我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
Every other word you utter is love
6 e8 q2 M% I8 K- K口口声声 说你爱我
I really want to know just how much you love me
真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
I love you I love you with all my heart
爱你爱你 全心全意
Nothing can compare to my love
世间万物  皆不能比
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- K- X1 O( r0 e* H# D  S9 n# jCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
/ V3 d7 y# n, G) J0 }' V$ q: t/ PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 v$ i! ?5 j& W! D/ ?整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
I want so much to see inside your heart
我真想看透你的心
I invite you to rip it out
你尽管把它掏去
To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( q  v; p0 b# F, }$ [若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
I’m still filled with fear
& G4 }3 @# t5 Z8 e2 t, |可我依然满心忧虑
% {) c2 Z& I+ n. BYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! ^# n% ~- T1 h6 t, a你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
I regret not dying
真恨不能 以死明志
% ^( t, g* m- W) Y& T* f2 zI only have one tongue
我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 I3 v7 |. D, ?* D也恨不得  多如千万
With such a tongue as yours,
你这张嘴 真真厉害
5 r- U) S, F; ?7 q" E' `Your speech can’t even keep up with it
能说会道 无以伦比
1 Q% v: g& Z$ V3 {8 m- I/ f: g6 o+ m; lIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
Rambling on about a thousand words of love
" V' [* |! m4 L" a; @+ X向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲

' s) [) M+ b+ ~: L) @6 qThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
从未向你吐露衷情
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
/ b2 D" n8 \( X' P2 s8 ^爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
, r. u: s/ j! I. r2 k5 O0 ^* _From the first moment we met,
. {- \9 {; }% H, P! B% @5 w对你一见倾心
I already loved you with all my heart
& {: l; ~. i5 o; V- y0 ]5 k从此别无他意
: x! |5 n0 B$ c: YWe meet and talk everyday,
* ^, T; K- S2 z& Y& f0 D4 O你我每天见面寒暄
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
- i8 S' I1 b- [( P奈何从未谈及内心
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
I would probably know how you feel
+ ~7 r1 Q' S7 m" M/ ~或能知你心意
6 I6 D' S0 f- H; @# z- mLove… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
5 x) q  J$ H, w% b* |3 _为何如此难言？
7 b- w: F3 v& [0 ]I want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
- }7 E! |* b! S7 V9 C; X! u, ZBut I never did
却始终未曾出口
  ]) v5 U" F, z# R+ ROne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 v. {0 p  n! @1 q只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
/ r5 K& R  e1 N  o# t* wIf today isn’t too late,
5 ~6 O3 X# `9 `. {. J, q. F6 A' t) a假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
4 ~/ Y; N. ]0 F6 D. z: R5 ACan I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你?
7 _+ U1 U* ^; ?; sEntrust my love within your heart
- F$ N& j% o# a, D  D5 Y从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去

' p/ M( y* J8 Z2 ]Love… just the word love
7 R9 H) [9 T2 Q* Y% r( q% r爱呀，爱就一个字
2 x( R5 J2 r5 {: T+ v, QWhy is it so difficult to express?
为何如何难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
( u! D2 m% {. L# w6 u  A我多想向你表白
But I never did
却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! ~$ B* Z5 Y# D5 R* v只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
$ k/ q1 K; ~( Z8 F- z* i( DIf today isn’t too late,
) O5 D1 p1 X3 g6 ~2 O' y& j假如还不太迟
( q, m! H, X* q) {I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
: S+ ~+ D! g" X- `/ e: w# B& gI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
: z3 D+ O+ l" ZCan I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去
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- @0 s( D$ p& S5 ECan I entrust it to you?
* {; O* T& i. |* @可否将它托付于你？
! e$ M9 A0 [+ c$ H) F3 e5 L5 B! _Entrust my love within your heart
0 w5 X4 q' R! p5 |从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
- C! F( }  Z) j+ r老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
) i# D# M. i  O& Q2 T; H老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
9 ~9 B& p6 Z  O+ e, T! W# m/ d. k刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

% Z+ F2 n+ x0 X$ ^不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。